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Good writing, imagery I can follow, characters that feel real *and* good sex scenes?
Just who are you, good sir?
I especially like the way you work in some more unusual kinks (spider-girls and goo-girls, eh?) but keep it...uh, "real". Ish. Real-ish.
Excellent read so far, please keep it up.

Hi there. A very interesting story:) I do hope you're going to update it soon 'cause I really like it so far and I just can't wait to read more...

I just found this story today, and I must say I was instantly taken it. Your grammar and sentence structure are excellent, and it isn't just about a 'wam-bam, thank you ma'am' situation. I look forward to reading more about Aine's adventures.

ur writing style is great. iv never read a pokegirl story w/ a girl like Aine as the main char. please update as soon as u can.

Nicely done. Your ability continues to deliever greatness (Or, what I think it is anyway) to me. If I have to say anything productive it's to keep doing what your doing and don't try and rush things! The best stories take time to craft into that greatness!

one i really am enjoying your story, i always like on where people use the lesser known pokegirls, i'm sorry to bother you with this but would it be possible to send me the link to the new pokegirl website when the old one went down i haven't been able to find the new one. thank you for your time and writing.

Hey, I absolutely love the story, and have enjoyed reading it, I really hope you keep going with it. ^ ^

*Nodding head and clapping* I must say, that I am impressed. Of all the fanfics I've read, this one truly sticks out for a few reasons:
You've got impressive grammar! (There should be a medal or something for that.)
You have a definitive hook with the story,
And you have an interesting style of presentation. I find that when you describe something it takes very little for me to recreat the scene in my mind. Most stories force you to work to a greater degree to get such images, but you get your point across.

I would be sorely disappointed if you stopped now.

HOT. MOAR.

Anyway, request time. Anal scenes, Tentacles, Aine getting fucked, and lastly, Aine with human scenes.

You're earning some serious brownie points with me, using all these Pokegirls that would otherwise have not gotten much screen time from the PG group. As it is, I'm not too favorable of the Slime girls, simply because they're nearly identical to the original Slimes that inspired them. Curious on where you're going to take this, and anxiously waiting for your next chapter.