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wtf! lol... hahha floss, body wash, hahaha,, that was hilarious

hi obsidian, i had followed you all the way here from fanfic. anyway! my goodness! whoa! that was hard lemon, i didnt expect this at all, hahaha... omg omg omg! i love the part where mousse drunk her, and do his thing to her. and she cant accept him as of yet... i have been looking for that kind of stories a long time. but i never thought i could read this super hard lemon

I gotta read more of this shit.....*braindead of evil!Mousse*

This story is hot as hell....great now I am acting ghetto....because my brain isn't working from medicine, being tired, and all the jazz.

Still good story and I am going to read more of this and your other works<3

A fascinating story, though I can't say I was really expecting it to end like that; actually, I was starting to wonder if you intended to have a finish at all, really. But either way, at least everyone, well Shampoo and Mousse at least, got a happy ending. Kinda seems like you seriously messed up pour Ranma, though, but then again I suppose this little problem might have come up eventually anyway. You did seem to forget to have Ranma go for a swim in the Spring Of Drowned Man while he was in China, or did the shock of losing his female virginity just make him forget? Oh, well, now I'm rambling. Laters.

Damn... It's not often that I find a story so powerful that it actually moves me to tears. This is one of them. If AFF.net ever decided to have a Top 10 list, I would do everything to make sure that this one was right at the top. This last chapter was a complete 180 from the previous chapters, and yet it was the most perfect ending that you could have written for this story. I look forward to reading may more of your works.

Thank you for writing Mousse's Revenge. It is one of the best that I have had the pleasuer... no, honor to read.

OH MY FUCKIN GOD! It just gets better and better! I NEVER saw this one cumming!

OMFG! Thats not a Lemon, it's a Space Station! Sweet Jesus, you can write an incredible PWP, only there actually does seem to be a storyline to this. Normally, I do not read hardcore lemons too much, because they are normally no where as well written as this one is. I LOVE THIS STORY! b(^.^)d Two thumbs up!

HOLY HELL! I just finished chapter four, and I WANT MOAR!!! This is a damn good story. You have some serious writing skills, and I hope that you keep updating at the pace that you have been.

DAMN! That was a fast filled request. The chapters keep getting better and better.

OH MY GOD! O_O This just keeps getting better and better