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February 13, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I really liked what you wrote ! ^^
I liked L's and Light's behavior and the concept of your story was a good idea.
Great Job ^_^
And thank you for sharing your story with us =D
I liked L's and Light's behavior and the concept of your story was a good idea.
Great Job ^_^
And thank you for sharing your story with us =D
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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
not bad at all!! :)
the only thing I didn't like about it was when you put random comments in your seperators like this" **************(omg fangirl attack!!)*************
otherwise it was a completely perfect fan fiction :)
the only thing I didn't like about it was when you put random comments in your seperators like this" **************(omg fangirl attack!!)*************
otherwise it was a completely perfect fan fiction :)