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for The Bargain

by Imsadistic

schedule October 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, maybe a little. Hm, Hiroshi into S&M, never really seemed the type to me. A nice finish over all, and my kudos. So, next up, an Ukyo gets hitched tale? or perhaps more on Ranma and Akane? Kasumi finally netting Tofu, perhaps? Oh, well, whatever you like. Laters.
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I hope Chapter 13 isn't the final chapter... -_-;
schedule October 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for this chapter. I had just posted moments before that I was hoping that Chapter 13 wasn't gonna be the last. I wish more writers could update as quickly as you do. and your writing does not suffer in the very least for it too.
schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I suppose that is one way to punish Kodachi, though not exactly what I would have expected. I do hope Hiroshi will ttake some time to actually get to know her, and let her get to know him after the official nuptials. And I'm thinking, due to a lack of a "The End", that there's going to be at least one more chapter to this? Until then. Laters.
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Actually, if you check one of my earlier reviews, you'll see I actually suggested Sasuke telling Yutaka about the placebos as he wasn't forbidden to do so, only from telling Tatewaki. Liked the wedding, and the wedding night, and is Nabiki pregnant with twins, or just admitting she intends to eventually have additional offspring in the future? Well, until chapter 13, then. Laters.
schedule October 16, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Ok, this was NOT what I expected... but I could not have asked for a better chapter. Thank you for your prompt posting of chapter 13. Eagerly awaiting chapter 14 now.
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yes, well, hopefully you'll be kind and give us the rest of the scene at the beginning of the next chapter, though considering this is a Nabiki/Kuno fic I won't be surprised if you don't. And I see you took my little idea regarding Sasuke telling Kuno-kun about Kodachi's little plot. That, or you'd already intended to do that all along. Hehe... Well, until chapter 12, and I'm going to guess the finale or very near to it, then. Laters.
schedule October 15, 2009 at 12:00 AM
That was another excellent chapter. it saddens me to see Soun acting the way that he is, though, Knowing what I do know of Japanese culture (having lived in Japan) it is understandable. Hopefully, he will see past the hurt pride and forgive.
schedule October 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. I like how the elder Kuno has changed for the better. I also liked how Kasumi laid the law down when Soun said that Nabiki would not be able to stay after the baby arrives. As for what Sasuke was telling Takawaki about Kodachi and her scheming... I'm HIGHLY looking forward to THAT showdown!
schedule October 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, I didn't expect that, even Principal Kuno is evolving and pulling himself together! And it occurs to me that Kodachi only forbade Sasuke from telling Tatewaki, not the Principal, so her little plan may be about to blow up in her face! Hehhehheh... I eagerly look forward to chapter 11! Laters.

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