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October 5, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Damn... an excellent chapter, if too short QQ. I WANT MOAR!!! T_T
I love your writing style and I look forward to chapter four, knowing it will be just as great as all previous chapters.
I love your writing style and I look forward to chapter four, knowing it will be just as great as all previous chapters.
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October 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I have to say that this is turning into another excellent story. You take the characters to places that the animators would never have dared. I'm not referring to the sex here, though you do that extremely well. I refer to the emotional depth of character you add to the story. You do this on a level that is rarely seen amongst writers, and seperates the outstanding from those who are still attempting to achieve such levels.
I like where this has gone so far, and I look forward to seeing where you go with this. My only request I could make is that this one is longer than the last story, so I may have more to enjoy. Keep up the excellent work, and I'll be reading more as soon as chapter three is posted.
I like where this has gone so far, and I look forward to seeing where you go with this. My only request I could make is that this one is longer than the last story, so I may have more to enjoy. Keep up the excellent work, and I'll be reading more as soon as chapter three is posted.