rate_review Reviews

Look, we can't help it if Marc is as totally HNNNG as he is, okay? That being said, I really did like this chapter. The battle was awesome, and hopefully I'll be able to use it as a bit of an outline for when I write one of mine. Keep up the good work, Luna-san~

wow i cant wait to read more.

I may not be a part of the group anymore, but that doesn't mean I don't like some R&R now and again... Which in this case, means 'Read and Review'. While admittingly I was never THAT big of a fan of the PokeBoy spin-off, you handle it very well indeed. Not to say I'm a fan now, or anything like that...

But, you got to give props where props are due. Regardless of my personal feelings, you sir, have a good story. I'll look forward to whatever else you decide to dish out as the story progresses.

Snidne
President of Angelic Evil Inc.

I know I've said this three times already, but this story is getting a great start. I've learned that funerals feel so long, and yet they're actually not. You really captured that feeling. I really don't know what to say about it. It just felt so sad.

I'm looking forward to chapter two~