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by GoddessKahori

person LadyNorth76

schedule January 3, 2013 at 12:00 AM

Please update soon. Thanks!

person calicokitten

schedule January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM

Can't wait to read the next chapter. Keep going!

person bonnybanshey

schedule July 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM

oh come on I'm wound up I want to see what happens

person AndoraT

schedule June 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM

Hey... evil... how about you do post the next chapter? please? I liked the first one!

person Blackwidina

schedule December 20, 2009 at 12:00 AM

AUGH! THE DREADED AUTHOR'S PEROGATIVE!

Seriously, how could you leave me hanging like that?!?

*cough* On the review-y side of things, I find your writing style to be incredibly engaging. I was glued to my computer screen the whole time I was reading; I also hugely appreciate your correct use of grammar and punctuation. Such things can't be praised enough in fanfiction.

All in all, I can't wait to see what the boys have been up to!!!

Dina

person Tiramisu

schedule November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM

Please write more!! Thank you so much!!

person BeefJerkyYo

schedule October 17, 2009 at 12:00 AM

It's a good start. I hope you can deliver on the next chapter being 2 times as long and was it 10 times as awesome? But all jokes aside, you did have a few spelling errors, (I don't have the right to say that because of my story are filled with them.) Also you should try using dialog from the anime or manga. Your characters act like themselves, but don;t sound like themselves. Try looking for their speech patterns. Haruhi's are obvious but some of the others won't be so easy.

I hope you find that useful and I hope that I wasn't too harsh. I look forward to the next chapter.

person Pixies

schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM

oooh I cant wait to read more! This is interesting!!!

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