rate_review Reviews

This was the awsomest, cutest, sadest, hurtful, and any other thing i can thing of but not right now lol!! But i loved this story sooooo much just like "Not an angel" and "We sleep forever"!! Actually i love all your stories their sooooo great you should be a writer. If you do write a book write a story on Matt and Mello please i would total buy it i just love them so much XD Sorry got off track anyway i really do love your stories and i reall want you to write the new story your talking about please please PLEASE write it for all the over MattxMello fangirls out there

First off, here's a BIG basket full of all the best cookies in the world for using the word 'Pwnt.' Total win.

I know I said Poor Mello before, but now Poor Matty! *hugs him*

I haven't made mention of it before, but I love how you switch the voices so we can hear the inner workings of both Mello and Matty (forgive me for calling him that; the roommate's name is Matt so I have to differentiate in my head D: ), and that you will show the A and B sides to their interactions as such. You do it quite well, as there's no feeling of lost time, and it still flows with the story. Very much enjoy.

More to come soon, yes?

Oh cliffhangers! Poor Mello, nothing ever seems to go right for him, does it? I love that you had him pick apart the novel and leave notes in the margins for Jasper, like it would be to spite him for giving him the horrid book to begin with. Oh, and Matty being the only one who actually likes Cell Phones. Great touch. Can't wait for more!