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Well, that's one way to ruin an otherwise great evening. I really liked that kids were getting along so well, by the way, and they're already mixing the languages a bit was nice, too. And poor Nanny, she's so put upon, but fortunately open minded. Cossak stepping in to help was very amusing, right up to his comment about having a spare holopod for his "private collection", lol! And it was really nice seeing both human and Drule coming together to head out and stop Merla at Pelphine, hooray for progress! Three hundred hostages?! Oh, boy, I somehow don't think this will end well no matter what happens... As to my chapter 4, I've actually decided to try taking a page from your book and have actually already written the next two and am hard at work on chapter 6(shiny new castle, ho!), and as soon as six is done, and four is run through my beta(also known as my sister), up four shall go! But that's another discussion, now isn't it? Well, until chapter 31, and the confrontation at Pelphine, then. Laters.

Oh, I dunno, considering everything he was confessing up to, a little paranoia was arguably justified. And yes, I did enjoy the interactions with Astatavina and Adrios, right from the moment he skipped out ahead of his mother and Cossak had to go catch him. It was wonderfully written all the way around, and I even found myself being both annoyed and sympathetic to Maltilda, poor old lady. Dinner this night should be quite the interesting affair. And by the by, I finally put up Ch. 3 of mine a few days ago(hint, hint, wink, wink, nudge, nudge). Well, until chapter 30, then. Laters.

Well, Alfor took all that pretty well, much better than Lotor expected really. Now, how will he react when he sees some of the more reptilian Drules? There in lies the question! I look forward to finding out, as well as learning what the heck Merla's been up to since we saw her last. Well, until chapter 29, then. Laters.

My, but Allura seems to be enjoying herself, isn't she? Hehe, that poor servant guy, I almost feel sorry for him. After all, she did ask his opinion, he was just being honest. And I liked the brief peek at the Drule kids, and Allura's reaction to their remote controlled toys, as well as the kids reactions to her. Yes, a very interesting and fun chapter all around. And I applaud Lotor's honesty about the situation with Merla as stands, no reason to sugar coat it. I look forward to the reunion with Alfor, especially when he sees what Allura's wearing. Until chapter 28, then. Laters.

Yay, the escape is begun and Merla's plot is set to collapse around her in rubble! Wahoo! Though I note Lotor didn't bother to turn off the computer before they left. Ah, well, by the sounds of it the pilfered power source will burn out shortly, anyway. Now, if they can just save the alliance with Alfor, somehow... Until chapter 26, then. Laters.

Yahoo, the message got out! And Cossack is a coming! Hope restored at last! Though I must say I liked the touch that the message was encoded, no doubt to keep Merla from figuring out what it was too soon, and that it's jamming of every other computer was starting to annoy the other Drules! Hehehe. Well, until chapter 26, then. Laters.

39, huh? Okay, then. And yeah, she badly underestimated the "lowly" humans, didn't she? To be honest, I hadn't considered the possibility of a spy in the other court, but now it's mentioned it does make a certain amount of sense. In fact, you'd think Altrexia and Ranseya would have spies in Alfor's court, who would have sent messages of their own already which pretty much confirm Alfor's claims against Merla. Oh, well, back to Lotor and Allura! Here's hoping for a speedy escape for them. As to my fic, not just yet, but soon...ish... And, yeah, I'd kinda figured that part out on my own, already. Until chapter 25, then. Laters!

Lotor better work fast, cause as stated, it's not gonna be long before someone looks in to see what's keeping Carp. Here's hoping for some positive progress fora change. On a side note, I was horribly distracted from my own fic for longer than I care to think(that and getting a copy of Golion for comparison purposes sorta held me up a bit), but I'm back to writing, and new chaps. should be up before much longer, I hope... Well, until chapter 24, then. Laters.

Hmm, never had a headache like that before, sounds nasty...

And so goeth Allura's blood innocence. But at least she dodged getting violently raped. And now Merla's down by one helper! Bonus. Now, if they can just get Lotor unbound and that computer fixed(if that's even still doable now) before some comes in to see what's taking Carp so long. Yeah, I know, fat chance. Well, until chapter 23, then. Laters.

A pesky headache, yeah, I know how that feels...

Boy, Merla's really being a bitch, ain't she? And I fear for Allura, if Carp's thinking of doing what I think he's thinking of doing. Of course, Lotor does still have that sword handy, if he can pick it up in time to use it, that is. Now would be a really good time to get that computer fixed... Until chapter 22, then. Laters.