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Short, perhaps, but it does get to the heart of certain matters. I think Lotor here is in that river in Egypt, de Nile, yes? Sounds like that computers gonna be stubborn for awhile, though. Hopefully Allura's right about the other rulers, and more hopefully it won't be too late when they get out of there. Well, until chapter 21, then. Laters.

Yeah, that was a good line. I might of risked killing Merla the moment I got the sword, myself, but oh, well. Back to trying to fix the computer, I guess. Until chapter 20, then. Laters.

Oooh, Merla you #@!^$%! Hopefully once he's free Lotor will be able to smooth this out before it gets too bad. And sadly I don't follow Valkyrie Profile, so I didn't recognize them. Oh, well. Until chapter 19, then. Laters.

Well, at least Lotor's hands are free, that's something. And just where does that ship think it's going? I guess qualifies under "One step forward, two steps back", huh? And of course I'm still reading, I wanna see how it ends, it's like a condition/curse for me. But you're welcome, none the less. Until chapter 18, then. Laters.

So Merla wants the throne and Arus all to herself, does she? The evil minx! And that poor priestess, she'll probably be bathing quite a bit after she calms down. Can't say I'm surprised that Merla's gonna mess up everything Lotor tried to put together. It'll be interesting to see just how bad it get's. Well, until chapter 17, then. Laters.

Oh, I don't think so, you're not getting out of writing this that easy! ::performs CPR to revive Michelle quickly:: Hehehehe, sorry, it was there...

Yeah, things are not going well, and it sounds like Merla's plans were in fact going swimmingly until Yurak and Carp messed them up by leaving the ships. At least Allura was able to do something about Lotor's arm, and now knows the truth about the Drules. It'll be interesting to see how they escape from there, and I'm guessing Cossack is going to factor into it somehow, yes? Well, until chapter 16, then. Laters.

Ah, familiar faces. I believe Yurak has a cybernetic right eye and arm, by the way. Interesting choice to use Carp, considering he was a one shot villain. And I think the whole God misconception has, for the most point, flown. Especially with Traad dying and Lotor being injured, all in front of some of the humans. Quothe Star Trek(classic series), "He bleeds! Behold the god that bleeds!" And i see me idea about the kids finally came up, if in only a planning sense. Until chapter 15, then. Laters!

Oh, crap, who let them off the main ships? This is really not going to help matters, at all! And was that person who jumped Allura supposed to be someone we know from the main series, or just another OC? Oh, well, until chapter 14, then. Laters.

Yes, indeed, foolish things. On the other hand, Alfor isn't entirely wrong in his decision, is he? Too bad Allura's not listening, huh? This could get troublesome. Oh, well. Until chapter 13, then. Laters!

Yeah, that pretty much went straight to fiasco-ville, didn't it? And she hasn't even opened her other presents yet, poor girl. I'm sure she got something nice. Oh, well, ce la vie. Well, until chapter 12, then. Laters.