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Yeah, this doesn't really feel "over" just yet. But still, got give Ukyo credit for self sacrifice, all things considered. I actually feel a little sorry for Kentaro, but it was nice he chose to stand by Ukyo's decision. Tanaka was kind of a slime bag, but at least he was on our side, kinda. I also kinda translated the comment, "And I know a lot of secrets" as "I know where all the bodies are buried, and I have a very good shovel." (Grin!) Well, until the next chapter, which I'm presuming there will be. If not, oh well, good story anyway. Laters.

Oh dear...did you just kill Mousse? And the poor guy was finally claiming his own power, too... Ooh, now I'm on pins and needles! The next chapter can't come soon enough. Until then. Laters!

Thank you for such a wonderful story. It was beautifully done.

LOL! Didn't see that coming, and yet it was beautifully written. Of course they would have other marriage laws aside of the "By Defeat In Battle" one. Hehehe, ooh, Ukyo is gonna freak when she finds out, and her mother isn't going to be much happier. Shame she's rather stuck up, Suki that is. An interesting character, and I rather like that she looks almost like an older, more effeminate Ukyo. Oh, yeah, it's gonna get interesting! I can't wait for chapter 12! Laters.

Jesus... my worst fears were realized -_-

Hmm, interesting developments all around, I see. I also note that you've had Ryoga get over his infatuation with Akane, and have apparently forgotten that Ranma technically already had his first kiss, courtesy of Mikado Sanzenin(you may recall that's why Ranma beat the shit out of him in the middle of the ice rink two minutes later!)! I must admit curiosity as to how Shampoo intends to punish Mousse without Ukyo coming down on her. Well, until chapter 11, then. Laters.

HELL YEAH Cologne! For once, she is on the side of Mousse! (she showed honor that Shampoo could never hope to reach when she did that)

Could this mean that Mu Tzu and Ukyo might end up married? I think that would be an interesting thing to happen. As for Shampoo and Ukyo, why do I sense a showdown coming between the two of them?

If this is what a hangover produces, I'm sending youa case of Stolitchnyia. Fine writing like this deserves some of the best Russian vodka there is!

I like what you did with Ryoga here. You took a chance and you played the cards, and I think you won a good hand here. Does that mean that he will no longer be able to try to date Akane? lol

Now, we get to the REALLY good part! THREE CHEERS FOR UKYO!!!!! I love how she stood up to Shampoo and put her, and Cologne as well, in their places. I do have a worry though. Shampoo's vow that Mu Tzu (sorry people, I just felt the need to use his proper given name) will be punished has me concerned for his safety. She IS a formidable fighter, and she has a mean streak that goes well with het jealousy.

This one line though...
--“That’s not what he said last night. It was my name that he was moaning, not yours” Ukyo replied evilly.--

PRICELESS!

Hmm, looks like you rewrote the last part of the previous chapter in this one, or part of this one accidentally wound up at the end of last chapter. Either way... Well, at least Ukyo's starting to admit her real problem, that's something. It'll be interesting to see how the meeting with Mrs. Kounji goes. Until chapter 10, then. Laters.

Oh, hehheh, forgot about the "Flash Forward" bit, hehheh... sorry...