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Ok, for a sec, I was thinking there was some timeline issues, but I took a quick look back at Chapter 8, and everything balances.

I have to wonder; whats gonna happen with Mousse. Is he gonna finally realize that there are much better women out there for him. Or is shampoo gonna finally get her head out of her ass and realize just what a good guy she is throwing away.

actually, I don't want the rest of the story spoiled for me. Once again, an excellent chapter. and I look forward to more updates! :D

Ooh, crash and burn! This may take a while to sort out, huh? No connections to each other, huh? I can live with that, I guess, I just sort of figured since Akane had shown apparently wearing an engagement ring, is all. Well, until next chapter. Laters.

Okay, I'm guessing we just made a connection of sorts to "The Bargain" and "Bridal Training", but that all three of these are in a separate continuity from "Mousse's Revenge", since in that one you said Mousse had in fact been deflowered years before. Oh, well. That said, wonderful work thus far, and I look forward to the next installment. Until then. Laters.

No need to thank me for writing these reviews, but it is appreciated.

This is only the second story thatI have read that they were gonna deal with Mousse's blindness. I like that. It's good to see his life starting to head in a better direction.

This is a hell of a shocker, what is suddenly goin on between Kentaro and Ukyo. I can understand Kentaro's reaction though. I hope that Ukyo comes around and realizes what she really has. and what her true feelings are. it's plain as day that her feelings towards Ranma is just an infactuation, while she seems to be developing true feelings for Kentaro.

Chapter six got a bit difficult to read when Mousse appeared at the door. I can understand what he is going through, because I was once in my life in similar shoes. Please treat him well.

MY GOD! This is your best story yet. You,ve pretty much made Mousse my favorite character in fanfictiondom. In the anime, you never get to know what the true pain it is that he feels. With your stories, you go so much deeper. You show all their hope, dreams, feers, pains, and loves.

Thank you.

Well, for a moment, you've almost made me dislike Ukyo...
Been there, done that with having a woman try to trap me.

Other than that, it was an excellent chapter. I like how you seem to really be able to bring a persond feelings out. thats a sign of an excellent writer.

Chapter 4 is quite interesting. It's good to see Mousse and Ryoga becoming friends with Kentaro, andwith each other from the looks of it. Though the duck-boy/pig-boy fight was quite funny.

Looking forward to Chapter 5!

This is really good so far. makes me wonder if Ukyo is gonna end up falling for the guy.

O_O ok... THAT was not the reaction I was expecting from Ukyo lol