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November 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
cool story so far. cant wait to read more. but make the chaps longer, theyr way 2 short. please update soon.
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October 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
ADD SEX. Otherwise good, but your chapters are too short
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October 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Generally, if you're going to do a PokeGirl story, you add gratuitous sex scenes, not skip them over. It's okay/better to have the scenes shaky or awkward as both you and the character gain experience with doing this.
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Well, for starters... it certainly LOOKS like a good start, but it lacks... something. I mean, besides the lack of sex scenes I mean. Not sure if your one of the group (If you are, I may have missed that... heh...)but...
Give me a call, yes? I'll await your reponse...
Signed,
Snidne. President of Angelic Evil Inc.
Give me a call, yes? I'll await your reponse...
Signed,
Snidne. President of Angelic Evil Inc.
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October 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Forgot this...
snidne@yahoo.com
Give me a call.
snidne@yahoo.com
Give me a call.