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September 17, 2013 at 12:00 AM
You cant spell worth shit and that story was horrible
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September 20, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Lol you kinda need spell check XD 'like a bath in heat' what's a bath like in heat? Lol Otherwise it was good! I liked it!
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December 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You have 23 paragraphs in this story and only one of them didn't start wit L or Light. Can you see where I'm going with this?
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November 29, 2009 at 12:00 AM
love the story ..when is chapter 2 ..??