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grait fan fic

I like what happen. I didn't know until I looked at the review's that you have posted another couple of chapter's I can wait to see what happen's in the other story.

Two great chapters at once and a nice cliffhanger....Wait a second I hate cliffhangers add the next story or else...I don't know what but it won't be plasent! Anyways loved the Naru chapter the best ;)

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

pretty good idea 2 end it on the moms and it was sexy, but i was really hoping the final chapter of this and the mothers day part of this fic woudl be shinobu and her mom. i mean i know theyve been in it a lot, but this whole story started w/shinobu having feelings 4 airi, theyve been major driving characters 4 the story through it all, and i think a romantic, sweet chapter of them 2gether 2 finish everything woudl have been a satisfying and apropriate way 2 end it all, just the 2 of them 2gether in love. but oh well, this story has been sexy 2 read, thx 4 making it!

W...Wo....Wow....That...Was...kinky....loking forwad for more...

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

That is really good. That pic of Keitaro's mom was very nice also. She does look like Keitaro right down to a tee. I can't wait to see what happen's next. Please post as soon as you can.

Good chapter noy what i never would have guessed that this would be the pairing looking forawrd to what ever you have next.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

I like it. I forgot about Seta and Sarah being like that. I can't wait for the next update to happen. Please keep it coming I love it.

Great new chapter really looking forward to the next one an can't guess who's in the next chapter

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

I think Keitaro and Haruka, a girl on girl action, Keitaro and a girl. Those are my thress guess that I have. I can't wait to read the next chapter. This one was great. Keep them coming and I'll review them and tell you what I think of them.