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I miss this story! :)

So hot. I love the development of the story, yet I fear that the scoundrel Henry will try something again. Hmmm. Looking forward to reading more of this story.

Hot and sweet; just the way I like it. Ciel is the cutest when he's writhing in passion. I look forward to the next chapter. Much love and anticipation. ~bye bye~

Oh my.... This story is incredible. I really hope you plan to continue this. Among kuroshitsuji fanfiction, it hits all the marks others miss... Crazy fucking good sex, and more notably characterization. It displays your considerable skill.

I think I'm going to have a heart attack. The most recent chapter was so wonderful!! Well, aside from that worm, Henry Newlove trying to take what belongs to Sebastian. But I'm glad Sebastian arrived in time, before anything too terrible could happen. I loved that after rescuing him from Newlove Sebastian comforted, re-claimed, and relieved the sexual frustration Ciel felt all in one go. I find Sebastian's posessive nature in this fic absolutely delightful.

I very much like the plot, the darkness and mystery of the situation all seem like a scenario that could have very well come from the mind of Yana Toboso herself. And the way you portray Sebastian and Ciel is wonderfully done! In reading some other fics I've had to stop reading because Ciel and Sebastian become so out of character that I can't stand it. It's refreshing to read a fic in which they are true to character.

I noticed you haven't updated in a while, and I hope that doesn't mean you've abandoned this fic. I'm anxiously awaiting the next chapter.

Great story! It's so nice when you can find a really well written, interesting, and believable Kuro fic. It's the perfect balance of smut (plus points! lol) and intriguing plot. I'm really excited for what will come next. Additionally, it's great that you based your story on this whole Cleveland street thing. It really kept my interest. I find this Ciel to be extremely cute and this Sebastian to be quite endearing. Can't wait to see what you have in store! :D

yes the wait was worth it. please do keep working at this, it's lovely.

This fic is so exciting, I can't wait to read the next chapter. Off I go!

It's very good, but it is mostly a PWP. What happened to the original mystery? There is very little conflict now. Ciel feels no turmoil, it seems to me.Mood and tone mustn't be neglected. Is Newlove really supposed to be the main villain here? The story needs some more drama, IMHO. I'll be very grateful to read more of it, regardless of whether or not my suggestions are taken seriously.

TY (=

Oh, this is getting so good! Thx