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WOW! That was great! I hope this is a long story! =D

good story one miner point though Ciel was raped so he knows what goes on in the bedroom also a`question is it complete thanks for writing it

good story one miner point though Ciel was raped so he knows what goes on in the bedroom also a`question is it complete thanks for writing it

Argh! I wrote an entire review and it got swallowed up somehow! Anyway, I think I said that I am amused by whiny!Ciel and adore manipulative, seductive, slightly vulnerable Sebastian. And I love how Ciel tries to be all proper but turns into a wanton mess (who wouldn't?) at the drop of a hat, lol. Newlove was all kinds of gross, and I'm sure it's not over as far as revenge and Sebastian are concerned. I hope it's violent. ;) It was heart-stopping when Ciel admitted what he wanted and Sebastian talked him through everything (and wouldn't "take him" in front of Newlove--rightly so). I don't mind the delay of them actually screwing; the build-up can be just as delicious and pays off later. ;D

Oh. My. Gods.

BRILLIANT! <3 You did not disappoint my dear~! I love the sweet revenge Sebastian took, the humiliation of Newlove was amazing! I also do enjoy that you put in Sebby's language when he's in such a state... it just adds to the story so much more! <3 Keep up the beautiful writing! *hugs*

~Dru

Lovelovelovelovelovelovelovelovedmfasfmlkmdf
/drooling illiterate mess on the floor

I loooove this story and I'm implore you to update now! Now, now, now! Hands down this is the best Kuroshitsuji fanfiction I've ever laid my delighted eyes upon~ So I would be most excited to see there was a new update, yes?

<3
DV

Excellent job! Thank you for updating this wonderful story once more. Please update again when you can.

Thank you for the new chapter! I still can't believe that Sebastian has STILL not taken Ciel... Such patience! Next chapter maybe?
Also, why didn't Ciel call for Sebastian earlier, like BEFORE he sucked Newlove? I can't believe Ciel would do that, even drugged, because no offense but Newlove seems too dirty for him (like STD dirty - particularly at the time the story happens). I do hope Sebastian will punish Newlove more than that and NOT in a sexual way either, because something tells me the bastard likes it... More of a painful I'll-make-sure-you-never-touch-my-master-again-you-dirty-rat kind of way...
Besides that, the relationship between Ciel and Sebastian seems to have reached a more profound level, and Ciel was very much in character (bossy at times, whiney at others, etc. but still strong despite his vulnerability) - Sebastian too, for that matter - which was nice. But will they close their case soon? I feel for poor Ciel's feet... :)

I humbly request, as a first-time reviewer of this story, that you update this NOW. I can list on one hand the number of times I've been arsed to actually leave a review on someone's story. This is something that needs to go on. Please update as soon as possible. Thank you so much~

OMG I don't think I have read anything that has impressed me as much as this has. I can't tell you how happy I am to have decided to wander back to AFF after months of absence to come across this gem. There are few stories that pull me in fully the way this one has and I find myself falling in love with your plot, characterization, and just the way you write. If you can not tell I'm just in awe of this.

I really hope you do update again soon! This story is far to good to leave hanging for long.

Either way, I now have a new reason to frequent AFF and I will keep a look out for your next update. Thank you so much for writing this.

-Akiru