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omg i love it so far!!! cant wait to read more about their....activities.....hehehe

Wow, this is amazing! Your writing style is smooth and compelling, and the plot is original and seems well planned. I loved Sebastian's interaction with Newlove, how he seemed genuinely interested in him for his own meis, but underneath that was the everpresent longing for his young master <3 Quite wonderful so far, please update soon!

Wow, this is amazing! Your writing style is smooth and compelling, and the plot is original and seems well planned. I loved Sebastian's interaction with Newlove, how he seemed genuinely interested in him for his own merits, but underneath that was the everpresent longing for his young master. Quite wonderful so far, please update soon! (Sorry, I don't think it uploaded properly the first time. xD)

This is a wonderful start! I can't wait for your next chapter!

I LOVE it! Must have more!

Uwaaaah!! Just what i was looking for! Amazing Kuroshitsuji fanfiction! You have turned my sour evening into something fantastic and for that I m uber grateful! I am seriously into what will happen next with this fic! WHat did Sebastian learn from Newlove while he jackhammered him into the floor? When will Ciel get a better idea of what it is he might be feeling towards Sebastian? When will Sebastian give in to his demonic nature and take from Ciel what he desires over and over and over again until he is satisfied? When do I get to read more hot male/male sexing!?!? Wooooo!! Wonderfully joyous questions dancing around in my head! I'm so so so excited and I await your next update! XOXOXs Kei-Chan

I love this! It's so brilliant. teehee. Oh, I'd love to read more of this.

Wow. This is so well written its amazing. Both Ciel and Sebastian are very canon, which is something i look for in the stories I read. I also love that their so much story, interesting and enthralling story and not just mindless sex in it. However, I love that Ciel is so unsuspecting while Sebastian lusts after him. But I would love for a little something to happen in the next chapter or so. A little taste of Sebastian teasing Ciel a bit. :)

Thank you for the wonderful read and I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter to come out.
Yours,
Mrs. Okita

This story is off to a wondeful start. I think it has great plot..and seductive substance.

The way that things are going is just fine.

I really like the new possibilities you've made.

And hmm...will Ciel be starting to hit the first throes of puberty in this fic, or will he come to learn all of this in that one moment (you know the 'eventual' moment where the sexual tension between Sebastian and himself reaches an all time high?) ?

either way you have great diction..i'm sure it will be just fine.

And let me add it was a real treat to me to hear sebastian talk dirty to newlove. In sex, I think words aren't menial..it a very powerful stimulator (especially imagining sebastian's masculine japanese voice)

browny points for you girl.

Keep up the great work. And I can't wait to see how Ciel and Sebastians come through their budding infatuation.

~Thelly

It is so hard to picture Sebastian with his hair slicked back. xD
Ciel is so cute when he's tired, too, I enjoyed reading him being all grumpy because he's hungry.