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by Synvamp

person jishe
schedule January 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
....>///<....
Jishe dies from a masive blood lost.....
PD. my ghost will keep writing the reviews for my.
schedule December 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jajajaja! Hello! It take me hours to ending your new chapter...you know...bussines...jijiji
That was hot! Well, at least the last part, not the one of Sanji with another man...a very disgusting one, for saying the least...
But seeing how you end it there, i have my doubts that Zoro continues...i don´t know...just that feeling. Of course as he was thinking of luffy, if he doesn't do anything...he is just a idiot!!!
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Hello there! I haven't seing this fic before...and what a waste was that!!! Just this first chapter is really funny.
I'll keep reading, it promises a lot!
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Jajajajaja, i knew it!!! Luffy's sounds of pleasure equals eating!!! XDXDXD
Poor Zoro, i'm starting respect him...all that temptation with the form of blond hair, slim muscles and incredible flexibity.
Too bad that until the moment there're just thoughs of Zoro...will like to see or more like read what sanji is thinking....
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Sanji is hiting him hard!!!!! >///< That's my blonde!!! jajajaja, his only reason in life: make Zoro crazy!!!
I love him.
And Luffy, what about him? Is someone going to appear later who breaks trough his dense brain and get his virginity? Shanks? Ace? Or this will be just a ZoroSanji fic?
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
T-T No more chapters...
Hope you continue soon. Your fic is very funny and interesnting...specially that last part...to bad for Zoro.
person Far away
schedule November 14, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Just read the story for the first time and I must say it's soooooooo good!
If you're not going to post it any further on ff.net then I will review it here. The last scene with Zoro and Sanji was so hot; stupid Brook for ruinning the moment.
Please update soon!

Have a nice day! ;-)

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