rate_review Reviews

Everythimg looke nice so far. It will be interesting to see how will things go from here on.
Hope you will update your story soon.^^

Off of the first chapter I have to say you have got me hooked. Any Lemon definitely has a lot more sustenance and feeling to it with tension and you wonderfully create such an atmosphere and deliver it in a unique yet stable way. Off of the first chapter I have to say that I am looking forward to the next, though I wish these chapters were a little longer. I like your cliff hanger.

2nd Chapter Review. Very very cunning and delicious read. You could go the next chapter as well and I don't think the readers would mind as long as you had the gears of deception and betrayal turning with the wheels of guilt and regret. You would be surprised at how readers here enjoy reading fiction that actually has a plot and flavor before exposing the juicy bits. Most people who're that impatient just scroll down anyways, so you win either way no worries. Keep up the great work, I'm very eager.

This one of the best stories that I have read in a long time.

good, very good. i like how the story is progressing and can't wait to see how Keitaro handles the news, as well as how the other girls will react to it.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

I like the story so far and im ready to read more keep up the good work :)

Keep up the great work. I hope you tell us who was outside of Shinobu's room but I know you have to keep it to yourself for a bit. But if you need any help let me know alright. I LOVE working on Love Hina stories.

Pretty good story so far. Like the way your putting the plot together with just the first chapter up. can't wait to see more.
Descendant of the shadows
-Twisteddarkness

A new Love Hina fic, and it's well-written and starts things out with a scene with my favorite character? Nice. I can already tell this is going to shape up awesomely.

I'm hooked. I'll be back whenever you have a new chapter for us :]