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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An interesting finale. Everyone, except Shampoo, who, let's face it, doesn't really deserve it, is now all but deliriously happy, and all is right with the world, and two babies are incoming! Though I'm rather uncertain as to how this version of Shampoo would raise her child/children, but, oh well. Laters.
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was sort of hoping Shampoo would be "fixed" by the oni too, but, oh well. Mousse and Kodachi, don't think I would have considered them together. Wel, until the epilogue, then. Laters.
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November 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I think you've made the perfect pairings in this story. It was beautifully done and now I look forward to your next creation.
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November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I think Shampoo's little secret is finally going to come out. I think Cologne is gonna be pissed. Though it does occur to me that maybe Happosai could be a target, but I imagine he's long since lost his, if only to a hooker... Yeah, forget it... Oh, well, until chapter 8, and most likely the finale. Laters.
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November 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
An outstanding chapter. I do not know whether or not I could have saved Shampoo is I was in Mousse's shoes.
I especially like how Kodachi actually turned out to be rather nice in the end. I think you have done something there that has never been done before. You made her human.
Thank you.
I especially like how Kodachi actually turned out to be rather nice in the end. I think you have done something there that has never been done before. You made her human.
Thank you.
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Yay, Ryoga finally knows his left from his right! Huzzah! And now all that's left is Kodachi, and arguably Ranma himself, and then Shampoo will have little option but to admit her error and beg for her virtue to be tainted to save her life. Until chapter 7, then. Laters.
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November 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OUTSTANDING!!! Maybe Kodachi might fall for Mousse possibly? she does have quite a few desirable traits, and maybe the Oni will have changed her for the better.
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
And another is checked off the list. I'm guessing Ryoga for next, then Kodachi, then perhaps in a panic Shampoo will actually set it on Ranma, and then someone will help her, but it's just a guess. Kind of sad about Ukyo's father, but them's the breaks I guess... Well, until chapter 6, then. LAters.
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November 24, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Very nice! Some how, I suspect that shampoo is gonna be in serious du-du lol
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November 23, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love Chapter 5. And did I get a hint of a possible Ukyo/Ryoga pairing for in the future??? I can't wait for Chapter 6 to come out.