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And then there was three(four counting Shampoo herself) - Ukyo, Ryoga, and Kodachi. Can't wait to see what you have in mind for them! Until chapter 5, then. Laters.

Well, that is one way to get Akane and Ranma together, I suppose. So, will Ukyo be next, or perhaps one of the guys? I somehow see Kodachi going last, only because other than Shampoo, she's the only where there's no one who would willingly couple with her in the main cast, well, maybe Sasuke... Oh, well, until chapter 4, then. Laters.

Nicely done. I think I like Nabiki and Takiwake pairings. I just thought about something. Kodachi...

The part of Mousse pairing Tofu and kasumi seemed a bit rushed (not referring to the sex scene part, the whole thing seemed rushed at that point)

Other than that, it was still excellent. and I am glad that you decided to continue this story.

Thank you.

Oh, I forgot to add, I have tried to navigate FF before, and I found it rather confusing, that and I no longer remember my password there...
Thats why I prefer AFF. Even when I am not looking for lemons, just damned good stories.

May have to be an accelerated wedding if all that "medical attention" winds up giving Kasumi a certain conditon, hehheh...

So, who will be next, I wonder? Akne? Ukyo? Kodachi? One of the guys? Decisions, decisions, eh? Well, I'll leave it up to you. Until chapter 3. Laters.

An OUTSTANDING chapter. This one seemed well thought out and flowed perfectly. I like how you resolved things so that Ranma doesn't have to kill Mousse.

I also noticed how you seem to parady the chinese names when you have new Chinese characters. It adds a unique humor to the stories that you write.

I never would have thought akane to be the dominating type. That was a refreshing suprise.

Looking forward to Chapter 4!

Somehow, I just new that it would have been Shampoo that sent the Oni after Mousse.

An excellent story, and one that would do well left as a oneshot. if need be, you could continue the Ranma/Mousse pairing. That might be interesting.

Heh, I'd actually mused the thought that Shampoo was the one who did the summoning before reaching the end, kinda cool that I was right. Well, if you did continue it, Shampoo's current best bet, if she survives this first night, would be to send it after a different sacrifice, her best options being Ukyo, Kodachi, and of course Akane, possibly Tatewaki and Ryoga as well, though those two are a far less threat to her. And I can also see her trying to take herself off the list by attempting to get Ranma to do her, only for him to get crafty and tell her no, and that there is only one man would willingly have her in his bed, and she knows who that is - Mousse. Let her suck on that for a while. Just suggestions.

That aside, loved the tale, and look forward to more from you, as you are very good. Laters.