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May 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
OMG! this is an amazing story! please continue it! You might want to use more periods though, alot of your sentences and run offs from other senetnces. Other wise its beautifully written and i absoulutely ADORE it!!
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March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Again, it makes me sad for Tsuzuki. He's got so much inner turmoil, I just want to hold him and make it go away. I really like this. I wonder, is there more?
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December 1, 2009 at 12:00 AM
please update i love your fics they show great promise and i look forward to your future works i love decendents of darkness but no one writes the fics its very depressing i hope to see this story updated soon an will egarly await the next installment keep up the good work i wish i could write like u do good luck
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November 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Like the first story I really enjoyed reading this. It's very in character and I could definitely see Tsuzuki thinking in this way.
He has so much self-loathing that it's just like him to think that his feelings towards Hisoka would somehow taint the young man!
It was also really good to see Hisoka's POV, and his frustration with Tsuzuki's seemingly continued lack of trust in him.
Hisoka always comes across as someone who is very analytical about his own and others actions and this comes through well in the story.
I would love you to continue this series, I would like to see where this could go...
He has so much self-loathing that it's just like him to think that his feelings towards Hisoka would somehow taint the young man!
It was also really good to see Hisoka's POV, and his frustration with Tsuzuki's seemingly continued lack of trust in him.
Hisoka always comes across as someone who is very analytical about his own and others actions and this comes through well in the story.
I would love you to continue this series, I would like to see where this could go...