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Cute finish, very well done. Yeah, the majority of the male population of Furinkan High would be in mourning over Akane going off the market. Hehehehe... I've actually written a few fics, some of which you'll find at regular ff.net under the same screen name, Scorpinac. Mind you, two are Sailor Moon, one is a Sailor Moon/DBZ cross of sorts, and the last is an Avatar:The Last Airbender(more of a drabble, really). Feel free to look if you like. Until next fic. Laters.

Ok Sid, you can say it. I want you to say it. It will do you some good even. (remember, this is AFF, not FF lol) Just say it three times real fast like this...

"fuckfuckfuck"

Give it a try Sid. ~.^

Ah, they made up, good for them. And I see Ranma is keeping his word about not stopping asking her until she says yes. Hehehehe.... And to think, Cologne's only true objection was his vision; poor Mousse. Well, I'm thinking one more may be in order, if only an epilogue of sorts. By the way, you labeled the Kodachi and Ryoga scene as Ukyo and Ryoga by mistake, might want to fix that. Well, until next, and final, chapter. Laters.

Not too many people know the meanings of these names. I guess that I have an advantage, having lived there before.

I really loved this story. I hope to see a new one soon. Your stories are the best.

I propose a challenge. I would like to see if the Voodoo boy can be turned into a good guy. With your writing and storytelling skills, I imagine your the perfect one for this challenge.

That's nice with everyone coming together like that. Just need to patch things with Ukyo and Kuno, and surprisingly it sounds like Kodachi's going to be the one to do it, o at least help with it. Now, if Ranma can just get Akane to say "yes", all will be, well it arguably already is well around, isn't it? Until chapter 11, then. Laters.

Okay, everyone's sort of coming together in their own way, and I thought it was cute that Ryoga's little brother was proposing to Kodachi, hehehe... Clearly one more chapter, though, to wrap everything up. For Shampoo and Mousse, though, I'm thinking the real hurdle is getting around Cologne, amazon laws notwithstanding. Well, until chapter 11, then. Laters.

First of, I want to give my deepest heartfelt thanks for the wonderful endorsement of My Story. It means a lot to me to know that someone cares that deeply about something that I put so much of myself into.

Now, about Chapter 10. I am most pleased to see Shampoo and Mousse finally together. I also love how Ryoga and Kodachi have fallen for one another as well. As for Akane and Ranma, You really have reached a new level of showing how they are as people who feel love and pain. What you have put to words in my opinion ranks up there with the classics. Have you ever considered moving on to the next step, and writing an actual novel?

It is saddening to see how a misunderstanding has place a rift between two wonderful people. I hope that it can be mended. When I read the end of the chapter, a certain song for some reason started playing in my head: Travis Tritt's "Foolish Pride".

Hehehe, okay, didn't expect that. And Kuno now knows about the curse, so that's another little problem solved. I'm guessing there'll be maybe one more chapter, and then this one's done? And since when did Ryoga have a little brother, or is he an OC(and would that be a stupid question?)? Hehheh... Well, until chapter 9, then. Laters.

Once again, another wonderful chapter. I think that you have done some excellent pairings.

Wow, Shampoo and Mousse are actually coming together, and surprisingly so are Kuno and Ukyo and Ryoga and Kodachi. Really wouldn't have thought it would happen with the latter two couples. And it seems like Akane's on the verge of learning who her chatmate is - about time! Hehehehe, I can't wait to "see" her expression. And nice touch with Ukyo getting sick and both Kuno's actually helping, Kodachi if only vicariously via Gaston. Well, until chapter 8, then.(By the way, did you mean to label this chapter as 8 instead of 7? Or did you actually skip one?) Laters.