rate_review Reviews

Excellent story. You managed to do the characters complete justice. Looking forward to more!

It's so hard to find a really good Saiyuki fic, both here and on ff.net, so I was very happy to find this story. Your writing is excellent, I didn't see any errors (which is very nice as it's hard to find stories nowadays with good grammar). I feel bad for Goku and Hakkai, Goku more though I think he shouldn't have used Gojyo the way he did (but I can understand why), and Sanzo is being the usual ass he always is while Gojyo is blind to how Hakkai feels for him. Very interesting, I can't wait to see the next chapter and how the guys react to each other.

Yay, I'm happy to see an update. I find this story quite interesting so far. Can't wait to see what happens next.

I'm sorry, but I think we're missing chapter 3. I haven't read the new one because I don't want to skip anything! Just wanted to let you know.

That was actually absolutely amazing. I honestly didn't expect it to be, but I was SO wrong, and it was AWESOME! I was laughing through most of it! Good job!

I read this story at fanfiction.net quite some time ago and have since been hoping that you'd update it. I really love this story. The dialogue is so witty and I think you kept Sanzo IC. The fact that you posted it here and now makes me hopeful that you'll continue this fic. Please do consider. :)

I really enjoyed this. You captured all the characters personalities very well, especially through dialogue! I can't wait for the next chapter! Will it be all Sanzox? or will there be non-Sanzo pairings as well?