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for Riding Crop

by Bloodysyren

person nivell
schedule March 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hot!! Maybe you could write a sequel where both Ludwig and Gilbert get to use Roderich! =)
person Tokopica
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like ending 2 better, even if it would lead to Hungary bursting in through the window and beating the living shit out of Prussia. lol.

Awesome story, by the way. The sex scene was good and steamy, very descriptive, as sex scenes should be.
schedule December 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG OMG!! thank you so much..... That was sooo wonderful .... i just love the way you write your stories ... it's like as if i'm inside the story too (*like.. inside the closet,..peeping... videotaping... fapping... and Twittering the internetz about me peeping while videotaping and fapping to "personifications of countries" having gay butt-seks .....LOL... fap fap fap*)

both ending are great, you could even mix both... so that you could "Fap Fap Fap" while your "LOL-ing"

(*°∀°) <=3 (**symbol: horny person ---> sucking penis)

it would be awesome to see Ludwig doing Gilbert, then doing Roderich, then doing both... it reminds me so much of your Original Vampire Stories ... (((http://original.adultfanfiction.net/authors.php?no=1296847427)))

i couldn't help but imagine...

Ludwig (germany)----------> as Dimitri *seme/seme*
Gilbert (prussia)---------> as Nickolai *uke/suke* (*suke=combination of an Uke and a Seme)
Roderich (austria)--------> as James (the priest) *uke/uke*

i really really really, can't wait to read more of your stories about them (Ludwig/Roderich and even Ludwig/Gilbert .... it just makes me so happy)

i'll send you a mail later tonight so that we can talk some more (....though it's more like Writing, cause it's mail n' stuff... lol)

hehe.... (oh, by the way.... i'm the girl that draws manga...just in case.... don't think i've forgotten the draw i owe you... hhehehehe... see u soon, bye *hug*)
person jeazard
schedule December 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This was one of the most BEAUTIFUL things I've ever read including a riding crop.
I love the way Ludwig handles it, how he runs it over Roderich's body. *_*x

Endings: I'm gonna have to go for ending #1.
I'm still wary of Prussia as a character; technically he shouldn't exist at the same time as Germany, at least not in more modern settings, and I hate how people depict him as East Germany (in the 194-1989 way). So yeah, definitely #1, it's so sweet and wraps up the whole music thing from the beginning.

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