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October 7, 2014 at 12:00 AM
This is literally one of the best written stories I have read on this site. Your use of language is beautiful. The details of their passion wasn't harsh or profane, but deep and poetic. Simply superb. I will have to read your other works. If you don't have any, I humbly beg for more.
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July 26, 2013 at 12:00 AM
Excellent writing, really. I like how you peppered moments of their relationship developing into the story. It's really sweet, and I love these two so much.
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February 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is very well done. It is hard to find a nicely written story involving two members of the opposite sex making love. I especially love the interaction between Haruhi and Tamaki. It's almost as if you've brought something fans of Haruhi x Tamaki had only hoped for. Job well done.
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January 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
great little piece. i loved how much character development you put into such a short time. tamaki and haruhi were different, but they didn't feel ooc at all...can't wait to read mor of your stuff.
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January 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Intense. I like it. You have a great handle on creating a mood within the story.