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Umm, you haven't forgotten about this one, have you? It's been a whole month since the last update...

Aww, that was sweet the way it got to Shampoo. Now, if they can just get him comfortable enough to do it for real! And now that we've seen this would be Kasumi-usurper, the game is on! Well, until chapter 5, then. Laters.

WOW! two stories updated in one day! I like how you brought out this side of Ryoga. It reminds me of when I was a Corporal in the Marine Corps teaching Marines how to shoot. (I know, entirely differend circumstances, but his actions and such is what did it)

Interesting how everyone is rallying to help Tofu. And I don't mind you taking my idea, that's why I suggested it. That's what it was there for. Though the idea of diminutive Kin aggressively jumping Ono Sr. is quite the image. :) Well, until chapter 4, then. Laters.

Ah, poor pathetic Tofu. Does he still have a chance to win the girl?! What he really needs to do is have a talk with his mother about his father, and thus learn how he managed to push through the "idiot barrier" as he calls it. Oh, well. Until chapter 3, then. Laters.

I are saddest. You still cannot update on the weekends. I assume that is because you have things which occupy your time at that point. Oh well... I guess I'll just sit here all alone with nothing to read untill Monday... T_T

Ok, ignore the pitty trip, it was a joke. I like where you seem to be taking this. Especially how you explained the Good Dr.'s behavior whenever he is around Kasumi. I am suprised that you did not have Ranmachan also dating him. Then again, with the three that you have lined up, it could get interesting. Especially with how psychotic Kodachi can get. Then again, you have shown a side to her that the anime never did let us see.

I'm looking forward to Monday and Chapter 4!

Ooh, poor Tofu! Interesting start, I must say. I look forward to more. Laters.

So tragic! She has the same feelings for him, but neither seems able to tell to tell the other...

An excellent beginning. I sense that there could be a lot of angst within this one. I look forward to seeing where you go with this one.