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for The Pursuit of Love

by Imsadistic

schedule January 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, a sweet ending for a sweet story. And Henna was an interesting guy in the end, and I think there's hope for him. Soap, on the other hand, is probably not gonna last as long as she thinks she will(can we say, "assassination"?). All said, wonderful tale, wonderful finish. Until next fic, then. Laters.
schedule January 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Once again, excellently done.
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn... I need to stop reading your stories Sid, they are getting too addicting, and I start having withdrawl symp[toms whenever i ain't reading one of them.

I love the Mousse/Ukyo parings. I think that they make an excellent couple. Also, the mentioning of the "cowgirl position", well, i think it fits her perfectly. I have always pictured her as a Country Girl. ~.^
schedule January 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, naughty, naughty Ranma and Akane! Oh, well, as long as they're finally getting together. So, one more chapter, huh? Okay, then. I look forward to it. Until then. Laters.
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schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was definitely sweet! I could almost cry at the end ;) Love the story and the pair! Well done!
schedule January 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
And now they know. I'm thinking one, maybe two, chapters are left. I liked the birthday party, and Mrs. Ikeda was a hoot(lol). By the way, Mousse's eyes are blue, not green. Well, until chapter 6, then. Laters.
schedule January 15, 2010 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY! They both realized that they wanted each other and listened to their hearts!
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loke how everyone has changed, yet they are the same good people they always have been, only grown and matured. I also like how you had Mousse deal woth, Ukyo's ex. Very well done.

Then we get to Mousse's POV...
It hit me like a ton of bricks. I was able to feel every ounce of pain and angst that Mousse had gone through.

You have a rare gift. You know how to bring out the true inner person in your writings.
schedule January 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Mousse's life after leaving Nerima kinda sucked... Alas, woe is him. And Jiro, what a jerk, good thing Mousse was there to intervene. At least the reunion party went well, and Gaori sounds adorable, and like a handful, but then arguably so were her parents! Now, if Ukyo can just help Mousse feel loved again, and admit she wants to be a little more than "friends" with him. Oh, well, until chapter 5, then. Laters.
schedule January 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, well, sorry Ukyo. But there are other fish in the see - Ryoga, Kuno, Konatsu, Tarou, Shinosuke, etc. So much for it being a one shot, huh? Well, until chapter 3, then, if there is one. Laters.

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