rate_review Reviews

I enjoyed your story. The idea caught my attention and kept it. One big problem, you need someone to proofread or edit your story. seat instead of sit. I had to reread the first sentence several times and it distracted from your story. There were more errors like that. I don't mean to flame you but to help. I really think its great that you posted your first story. This is coming from someone who reads and does not write.

Wow. I totaly love this story. It doesn't shows Tezuka as perfect and I'm just in awe of your Fuji. I can't wait to read the next part.

Inkino