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June 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I love your story...but where the rest of it!!! I want to know what happened after this chapter!!!!!!!
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January 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So I finally come back to this story after... well, goodness knows, it was a hell of a long absence. And I had a catching up session that lasted the better part of three days. Let me tell you... you don't waste time with the one-two-punch. Bam! Right to the gullet! I literally felt my stomach clench as I read the last few lines of the current chapter. *shakes head*
I can't help but get emotionally involved, especially since I can see so many parallels between the way Carriers are treated in your story and the way gays and lesbians are treated now. I live in the South and *shudders* my plan is to move out soon because the minds here are so closed off and religion-soaked. It stifles a person. So when you described Atlanta and such in the previous story (UII), I understood perfectly. It really is like that down here. It's awful. I've gotten into so many arguments with co-workers because I won't stand for them to insult or degrade anyone because of their choice in lovers. It's enough that everyone knows me for the open-minded person i am now. *laughs* But anyway, that's neither here nor there. I just mean to say that I really appreciate the element of realism that stays attached to your story.
I'm also really enjoying the side story with Drake and JJ. It's so cute! I don't know why, but I seem to find it more adorable than Dee and Ryo. Maybe because JJ always had that one-sided adoration for Dee and he finally has a chance to find his own happiness.
Also, your OCs are really interesting and engaging, though I totally called Richard being involved. I had all kinds of whacky theories prior to finding out who headed Carriers Inc. Most of them proved false, but I totally saw Richard.
Ahem. Anyway, I blabber on. Just wanted to say that I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for posting such a great story!
I can't help but get emotionally involved, especially since I can see so many parallels between the way Carriers are treated in your story and the way gays and lesbians are treated now. I live in the South and *shudders* my plan is to move out soon because the minds here are so closed off and religion-soaked. It stifles a person. So when you described Atlanta and such in the previous story (UII), I understood perfectly. It really is like that down here. It's awful. I've gotten into so many arguments with co-workers because I won't stand for them to insult or degrade anyone because of their choice in lovers. It's enough that everyone knows me for the open-minded person i am now. *laughs* But anyway, that's neither here nor there. I just mean to say that I really appreciate the element of realism that stays attached to your story.
I'm also really enjoying the side story with Drake and JJ. It's so cute! I don't know why, but I seem to find it more adorable than Dee and Ryo. Maybe because JJ always had that one-sided adoration for Dee and he finally has a chance to find his own happiness.
Also, your OCs are really interesting and engaging, though I totally called Richard being involved. I had all kinds of whacky theories prior to finding out who headed Carriers Inc. Most of them proved false, but I totally saw Richard.
Ahem. Anyway, I blabber on. Just wanted to say that I'm looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks for posting such a great story!