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Hmm, quite a happy ending for so dark a story - not that I mind :). Glad that Akane, despite her hardships, managed to find some happiness! Also glad that Soun apparently improved somewhat in the end (guess his feelings as a grandfather won out over his greed in the end) - though I guess Genma remains the same as ever...

Keep up the good work!

Hehheh, nice. Everyone's more or less happy, and all's well that end's well. And the twins sound absolutely precocious. Well done. Until next time, I suppose. Laters.

A fine ending. A am pleased to see that Soun finally got his head out of his ass and came around.

Aaaahhh, and I was so looking forward to Soun getting his ass kicked for being such an a-hole, too... Oh, well...

It seems like Akane is happy at least, and bright things seem on the horizon. I look forward to the final chapter and seeing how everything all comes out. Until then. Laters.

Okay, now Soun's looking to turned into a bloody pulp, if not be Akane then by Mousse, possibly with Ranma helping. Somehow I see Akane choosing to not only marry Mousse, but taking her chances in China. It'll be interesting to see what comes of it. I also find it interesting that Ranma's taking things relatively in stride while Ryoga and Kuno are feeling mildly hostile toward Mousse, but kept it in check, and seemingly even 180'd when they learned what was done to make Akane and Mousse go through with sleeping together. Until chapter 8, then. Laters.

Thank the Lord that they finally got away from Japan. I was getting worried. I cannot wait for the final chapter. Well, come Monday, it should be up!

Hello to you, too, Imsadistic! Something tells me the boys may be planning something else on this one. And if Akane didn't have a reason to clobber Soun before, she will soon. And Genma's getting close to a major whupping, himself(I don't particularly give much stock to the idea that Ranma's not really his, but for this fic...). And at least Shampoo's showing some sympathy and understanding, so there may be hope yet for to realize what she did wrong with Mousse. Well, obviously there's going to be a little more, so I look forward to chapter 7. Laters.

Wow a truly impressive story so far. At first I didn't want to start because of the subject but once I did I couldn't stop. I can't wait until the next chapter.

Grrrrr Suon drives me mad! Poor Akane and Mousse.

The more I read this, the more I want to write a oneshot where the two sperm doners (Soun and Genma) get tortured in the most grusome, graphic, and horrifying way. Maybe gang raped in the process.

I pray for Akane and Mousse right now. They are good people, and they do not deserve the shit that her father is putting them through.