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Well, on the one hand, I'm happy they're free and safe and sound. On the other, I'm a little pissed at everyone for how they're treating Mousse over this. I imagine though that once Akane hears what Soun and Genma did, she'll give them a hell of an earful! And I wouldn't be surprised if Ranma, Kasumi, and Nabiki join her on that one. Well, Kasumi and Nabiki at any rate. I am a little disappointed that all the bad guys walked away alive, but at least they're going away for life plus sixty, so I'll deal. Well, until chapter 6, and possibly the finale, then. Laters.

I feel so sorry for Mousse! Can't wait to read what happens next.

Jesus... in some ways, this hits home worse than any other story that I have ever read. Not that I was in the same shoes, never having been abducted and forced into a baby factory, but the aftermath...

Everyone blaming Mousse and Akane is about right on as to what happens afterwards.

As to losing the children, That is the most painful aspect of it all. Unless you have lost children, you can never understand the pain he is going through, and that Akane will go through if Soun has his way. At the very least, they do have some friends who do seem to understand. Not everyone who goes through shit gets to be so lucky.

All right, the gang's coming! And with three months to spare, they can still save the babies, too, though who knows how they'll all react. And I expect at least a partial massacre when they arrive of the organization running the farm, lord knows Shampoo and Cologne, and possibly Happosai, won't be pulling their punches on this run. Until chapter 5, then. Laters!

An outstanding chapter. This one is really bring out the horrors that is the aftermath of such a traumatic experience. I pray that Mousse and Akane turn out all right. What Soun fails to realize is how this incident will effect both Akane and Ranma. Then again, I guess his true colors have finally been shown, and all he really cares about is having his heir.

Personally, at this moment, I wouls like to give Mr. Tendo Exedrin Headache #.357

To The Major;
I do not see where this story has a simplistic plot to it. Nor do I see how this is in any way inferior to any of her other writings. Maybe it's because you see them reacting to a situation that the members of the Ranmaverse have never been seen in before, and you prefer to read stories that follow the canon of the anime/manga a little more closely. Please remember, this is the product of someone with a wonderful imagination, and the rare gift to put that imagination into words.

To Sid:
Thank you for another fine chapter. I especially like how you had it as Ryoga who figured out how to find the clue in Ms. Sato's scribblings. Not many would have thought of that. Also, I'm surprised that Soun has not taking up smoking again. In a particular episode, he is seen smoking after finding out about "another" engagement arranged by his friend Genma. (if I emembered correctly, they were Marlboro Reds, I shall have to look it up)

I did notice that you appearently are missing a line or two from the opening of the chapter. Do you copy and paste your chapters like I do?

To Scorpinac:
I suspect that you may be right, though we shall have to wait to see what Sid has in store for us loyal readers.

Simplistic plot. Descriptions of the capture and later fights simply not credible for the Ranmaverse.

Why is this story so vastly inferior to earlier efforts?

Oh, dear, poor Mousse and Akane, it's not looking good for them, is it? I do hope they're saved or escape before the baby's born, I don't think either of them will be happy to be separated from it. And I'm definitely seeing blood being shed from these guys, if not by Akane and Mousse, then by Ranma, Ryoga, Kuno, and possibly even Shampoo and Ukyo. Well, until chapter 4, then. Laters.

Whoa, what an opening! I wouldn't have expected such a tale from you, and yet here we are. And I eagerly look forward to more, not so much for the smut, as I'm thinking it won't be too long before Mousse and Akane break down, ar ot least bend a little, and do it, but to see what it takes for them to either escape or be rescued! And I'm thinking there may be a lot of bloodshed before the tale is done, and I don't just mean hymenal. Well, until chapter 3, then. Laters.

Damn... It appears that Akane and Mousse are in serious shit now. so far, it's coming along excellent. Keep up the good work! Untill Chapter Three then. ^_^