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April 12, 2018 at 12:00 AM
adult story my ass
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July 20, 2016 at 12:00 AM
You know that scene in XY where AZ finally meets his Floette again?
Yeah feels like its been about that long.
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November 24, 2015 at 12:00 AM
It has been months since the last update, so I shall now do an Internet noob. Can I plz has update. Thx.
Noobness aside. I really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
Thank you for being awesome.
Noobness aside. I really love this story and can't wait for the next chapter.
Thank you for being awesome.
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January 20, 2015 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story. Great plot, and I like seeing a good fanfic not based around fucking Lopunny. I can't wait to read the rest of it, I check back 3 times a day to see if you've updated it.
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June 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I don't normally review, but I need to know how long you plan on keeping us waiting. It's rare to find a writer with talent on this hovel of a site and I am not patient.
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March 24, 2013 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start to a story
However I did notice an error but only one
And also the fact that you assume that your readers all use computers is a little insulting
I am using my iPhone
However I did notice an error but only one
And also the fact that you assume that your readers all use computers is a little insulting
I am using my iPhone
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I love the story your building. just the right pinch of everything. Some minor delays here and there but very very nice.i think things kinda became lucky, (like th ecommunication a little bit early but over all i believe you have made a wonderful story to get lost in. Eagerly waiting for more!
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay, the out of the blue "o hai I can talk nao, 'runi" really fit well with...being out of the blue; nice and surprising, giving us a good feel of how the characters feel. And I highly doubt the sudden brainfucks he's getting are related to being hungry.
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September 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I couldn't help but find it amusing slightly that Iruni is slightly hemophobic; it'll be a mighty inconvenience if he or someone else gets wounded in the future. Glad to see an update after such a while; I can understand due to the length of the chapter. But hey, atleast you're not writing several novels at once like me. Ruby/Iruni/Rikalia relationship is excellent, by the way. +++++
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May 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Alright, so the rest of the story is excellent (in case you didn't know, the first review was for the first chapter, used to the FF.net reviewing process). The latest chapter is actually my favorite in terms of characterization and plotiness. I especially loved and hated Ruby, the way she messed with Iruni; and the childish innocence of Sneasel is excellent as well.
I'm just gonna say you have a +++++ story, my friend.
I'm just gonna say you have a +++++ story, my friend.