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I  think this is like the 3rd time I've read your story.. I I love it every time!

Lovely story!!! keep them coming :}

So far it's very gripping! I am enjoying it a lot and would love to see more! Please continue!

At first I was turned off by the big chunky paragraphs. There are some grammatical errors as well, but you have a good understanding of their relationship. It's a little vanilla for my taste, and the back-and-forth POV isn't my style, but I read the whole thing regardless.

This last chapter was just enough. Nice.

Was that the end? it's been about a year since you've updated do I get to see the end if this isn't it? Great story btw, keep writing!

I have to admit that I cautiously read the first chapter...and immediately demolished the rest. :)

I'm very picky about fanfics, I just can't stand when people bend and twist characters to fit in with their idea of a romance - and you have done no such thing. Rather than changing Fuu or Mugen you've added more depth than the Anime portrayed. (At first I was sceptical about the possibility of Mugen smiling and imagining a bright and fluffy future-he just doesn't seem like THAT kind of guy-but I soon found myself enjoying the possibility that yes, his character could be capable of some real bouts of emotion.)

The plot is brilliant, Takara is my new idol, I can finally stand the idea of Fuugen, & I can't wait until you write more!

Honestly, I thought chapter 6 *was* the ending haha.

Oh! I suppose I should add that in the chapter where Mugen gives Takara to Fuu (I read it so fast I don't remember which chapter it was ^^;) there was one spelling mistake that stuck out at me like a sore thumb. You wrote that she kissed him on the 'check' instead of the 'cheek'...apart from that, my only other "complaint" is my lack of education in Japanese culture. I had nooo idea what a engawa was. Haha, and the only reason I remembered it is because 'engawa' is still open in another window after I Google'd it. ;D

Powpow! Keep up the awesome work, Anna!

So good! I wish the smut was longer though!

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Ok, so I read chapters 1-5 straight and...I'm wanting more. So tell me, is this a story that your going to continue writing? I hope so, cause I'd really like to finish reading it! Oh, and I thought the same thing with that crazy one eyed patch guy and his creepy brothers. So, I'm glad to have met someone who thought the same thing I did. :)

I've tried to figure out how to do italics, but I couldn't figure out what to do. It's really annoying because there are a LOT of things I would put in them... if you know how I would REALLY appreciate it!!!

haha yea that for a title would also be a bit misleading. hehe but it would have worked. Anyway another good chapter im glad to see you're a regular updater :] Keep up the great work.