rate_review Reviews

Yeah it was short, but something important did happen so it was a productive chapter. I also meant to tell you that in the previous chapter, you may want to consider putting Fuu's rape flashbacks in italics or something, just so we know they are flashbacks, ya know. I remember I had to read that part a couple times before I understood what was happening. Just a suggestion.

-B

Love it so far, just found it last night actually surprised at my luck of when i sign on this morning to finish it there was a new chapter :] very great. I can probably imagine Mugen... naked... being attacked by a cat like that great comedy. Can't wait for the next update.

Alright got a shout out! :) That was a good chapter. Poor Mugen. Can't wait for more.

This is pretty good. I'd like to continue reading this.

As far as the guy raping Fuu. I'd never saw it that way but its possible and definatly adds something to your story. I had always thought that he just groped her or something.

sorry! i didn't mean to deleate your reveiw, coffee girl? was that your name? i clicked the wrong button... yeah, you're right, i'll try to edit it but i'm not sure how, thank you so much for the review, though! my first review and i accidentally delete it... ugh...