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for The Proposal

by Imsadistic

schedule February 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah, but is this the end? At least Mousse is taking things well, that's something, anyway. And Shampoo is still allowing Mousse to part of the girl's lives, so that's good. Well, until next chapter, if there is one. Laters.
schedule February 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I am guessing that this was the final chapter. (5) I loved your story. It really came out well. Just the right touch of lemon and love.
schedule February 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Of course, I've been wrong before... Mousse might want to make sure those girls are actually his before confronting Shampoo, and alas poor Nabiki, she married a blank shooter, darn! Somehow I sense that just maybe she'll wind up with Mousse after all, the way this is going. Well, until chapter 5, most likely on Monday, then. Laters.
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Poor Mousse, loosing his sister like that. He has my sympathies. At least he's finally making headway with Shampoo, and Ranma and Akane got together. Apparetnly, though, Kuno is not so secretly still stuck on Akane, but I imagine the next chapter will maybe end that. Well, until then. Laters.
schedule February 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jesus... I do not think I have ever seen two people who would have made the perfect couple. It is unfortunate that they have yet to realize that fact, and went on to marry those whom they craved, yet were totally wrong for them.

Maybe Garth rooks was right with the song Unanswered Prayers...
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, can't say I was expecting you to continue this one, but interesting all the same. I look forward to seeing what all comes of this. Until next chapter, or fic, then. Laters.
schedule February 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn... your stories just keep getting better and better. Could it be that Shampoo is gonna finally realize just how good a man Mousse is?
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This one definitely has a different twist on Shampoo than you usually see in a fanfic. I like it. I like this style as well. It's raw and so truthful.
schedule February 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Om... that should have been "Mousse" and NOT "Shampoo... -_-;
schedule February 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mousse x Nabiki? That's a rare coupling. Not badly done, though. What's next, Mousse banging Kasumi? Oh, well. Until next time, preferably the finale of "Captured", then(am I being a nudge?). Laters.

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