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i love this story so far and cant wait till you continue

luvs yuki and kyo *scream* thier so cute together *faints*

I have to say I'm very, very pleasantly surprised. ^_^ Well, to start off, because of the usual low standard of both sex scenes and language in most pwp's and oneshots I tend to avoid them. Meaning I mostly end up reading those longwinded (30 chapters for one kiss? I'm thrilled, really, I am 9_9) stories that go on forever without much actual slashyness going on all. Both story types of which leave you unsatisfied. With this I wanted to establish that after six years of reading slash I've turned into a bit of a 'fiction snob'. So, when I on a whim decided to read this I really didn't expect much. For this I apologize, because I found myself very impressed with how this lemon was written. I very much liked the twists and turns that most likely are because of being based off an rp. I always thought rping brings a sort of life to texts that isn't as easy to get when you write alone. So, this is very nice work from the both of you. ^_^ But I can see that you're a very talented writer in general elrazhnia and I'll be looking for more stories by you to read. Well, I rarely review which might be obvious by my lack of encouragements, exclamation points and compliments. But, maybe the fact that I usually don't review and never before have reviewed a pwpish story like this will serve as a compliment in itself. So, to sum it up: Yay! This is great and I will actually be following this. ^_^ (I usually never read fiction which isn't completed. ;p You're breaking a lot of my habits here.) Great work, you've got a new fan. //Reicha