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February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
More please :D
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November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
All the chapters I've read so far are pretty decent. If a bit short. But hell, who am I to talk, my chapters tend to be over-long if anything. Other than that, being a bit more in-depth couldn't hurt. And sexual tension before getting down to business is always nice. I was a little disappointed about how fast Kaidoh found out, though.
Other than that, interesting original character, and relatively decent build up despite the chapters being so short. I wait for more.
Other than that, interesting original character, and relatively decent build up despite the chapters being so short. I wait for more.