rate_review Reviews

I really like this story. It's giving me that "Oh my god, what happens next!?!?" moment when I read a really good story (like this one here). Please keep goign with this story. It will be sad if you don't. That.. and Haruhi is now stuck in emergency care till you continue the story, and we cant have that :)

OK I went through a lot of annoying trouble to write this - so be impressed! First of all I don’t usually review unless I actually like something, second when it’s a “must be logged in to review” I usually say to heck with it, and finally it has been so long since I have logged in that I had to create a new account for this. I must be in a fairly good mood to do all that. First things first, please take the “must be logged in to review” qualifier off, I am sure that is limiting the number of reviews you get – it was 0 when I wrote this.
I also hope that you do continue the story – it has been 3 months so I am wondering if you will be added to my list of authors to avoid since they never finish anything list. Now yes that may be harsh, it’s your first story and maybe it takes you a few months to write a new chapter – which is fine because I will keep reading as long a I know that something is going to happen: but that list of mine is pretty long now so I feel it’s a valid concern.
The only thing I am going to say about the story is I do like it and how your mind works in the writing style. If a new chapter appears then I will actually start giving constructive criticism. Thanks and please continue the story.