rate_review Reviews

YuukiSan: ok you know that I love this story, and it has everything. It's funny, and heartbreaking. It has those "she so did not just write that" moments that just keep you hooked and that last chapter is just epic. The only thing that bugs me is that I find it hard to teel when the flash backs start and end. You might wanna think about making them italicised (wow so not spelled right) to make them distinct. Other then that I really do love it.

NinjaMouse: the bitchy fight scenes are awesome. Most people concentrate on just anger in those kinda things (I know I'm really bad for that) you don't. You bring the heart-wrenching into it, which is good. I don't know of too many unemotional fights. You've always been good at angst and now you're better.

YuukiSan: All and all really good job. This is the kinds writing I inspire to acheive and yet make my own as well.

NinjaMouse: Now enough of the mushyness from us... off to read CmBr

There aren't enough good Silverpair fanfics out there, but when reading this, my hope is returning.
I like your writing style and not to mention the plot and the last chapter which was to die for.
I just love when Ohtori's in control, showing that it's more to it than that shy and gentle boy. :D