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Mmmmh, this fic is very interesting, I hope to see a new chapter one day! :)

I'm already wondering who will be the next "victim" of Keitaro? Motoko? Or maybe Shinobu?

Awesome job. Hope ta see more soon :D

Great story. Please continue.

Love the story and hope to see more and wondered something like who else will are horny hero get to next and how big has he gotten as he is bound to have stretched motoko out.
That and to prove that he has these powers maybe have her get pregnant with twins or more. that and will su be pregnant and also who else.
tha tand will shinobu and her friend nymo becoming in soon same with the other girls.

that and the possibly worst thing i could think of to prove his powers word be to have motoko do an animal and pecome pregnant with the animal offspring and quicken the birth of it.

heck could you msg me and have a talk as i would like to do something and would rather it be private okay.

but great story and hope to see what you do next.

Great stuff..would be interesting to see Keitaro, Suu and Motoko get the other girls..Kitsune and Mutsumi would be a great addition. Will Motoko now be his loyal partner? Staying tuned for more!

nice

Hot piece of work, do continue. Can't wait to see how Keitaro gets with the other girls especially the three endowed girls IMHO: Mutsumi, Kitsune and Naru. Keitaro's character should make himself boosted more in strength, stamina and speed though. Keep it up!

This is really a great story and i would like to read more. keep up the good work

Please you must write more!

Very nice LH story you have here. It's interesting to see Keitaro have this type of power. Shinobu should be the next girl for keitaro followed by Mutsumi. Naru and Kitsune should be last to get some of Kei because of all the shit they put him through. Can't wait for the next chapter.