AFF Fiction Portal
GroupsMembersexpand_more
person_addRegisterexpand_more

rate_review Reviews

for The Making of Something Different

by sharingan154

schedule April 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hot start lucky keitaro he will get more girls that way
schedule April 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, despite the ridiculous premise, I think you may have written the perfect Love Hina fic. Most of these just get bizarre, or completely bogged down in the relationships and picking one girl or some other nonsense. Here you have an omnipotent Keitaro just doing every girl in the place. Sounds about fair. Hope to see more.
SailorNemesis
person navypolice83
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
this is one of my favorite stories but dont take this the wrong way but its about time you updated it hopefully in the next chapter he has sex with shinobu
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very nice to have you back I look forward to new stuff from you
person naruto86
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Finally I was really afraid that this wouldn't be continued, please continue updating I really like this story!!!!
person naruto86
schedule March 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story and I hope you add the girl Priestess to his harem, please continue!!!
person Shawndra
schedule February 27, 2009 at 12:00 AM
The story line was awsome. You should definitly continue this one.

Sincerly,


The Prince of Madness
person naruto86
schedule September 28, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is a Good story, so why have you not continued it it's too good to stop now?
schedule May 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
this is a great fanfic are u gona write more?
person nagao
schedule August 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love the story and I really hope you add more chapters

Age Verification Required

This website contains adult content. You must be 18 years or older to access this site.

Are you 18 years of age or older?