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by MikoNoHoshi

person Dragon Lover
schedule May 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I want some lock picking lesssons! I can't wait for more!
person Dragon Lover
schedule May 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter! I can't wait to see more interaction between Yoji and Aya, and between Aya and the other guys!

-update soon!
person @met
schedule April 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
well, i already commented on ff.net but still when i saw it here, i skim read and commented again, good so far, cant wait for more!
person Dragon Lover
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter! I can't wait to see how the other guys act to Aya being there! Update soon!

-Till then!
schedule April 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! I think it's so wonderfully written and what makes me smile is your creative ways of asking for reviews. They all make me laugh. Thank you so much for writing a story like this. I can't wait for more. Please keep going
person Dragon Lover
schedule April 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
haha I love Aya's reaction to being Princess now. I can't wait till you update again!

-till then!
person Dragon Lover
schedule April 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good Chapter! I can't wait to see how Yoji takes to seeing Aya on the floor, and how the other guys find out about poor Aya. Please update soon!

-till then!
person Madisuzy
schedule April 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yeah, another chapter!!!!!!! So glad Ran wasn't left behind. I'll be eagerly awaiting more.
person Madisuzy
schedule April 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story! I hope you'll continue it because I would love to see what happens next. Ran's suffering is very disturbing and you've done a wonderful job of keeping him very in character.
person Kryptonite
schedule March 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aw! I feel so bad for Aya... you torture him so! Please update soon!

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