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Hay. Just thought Id let you know that something is wrong with chapter 30,I hope you fix it because this is the BEST Ai no Kusabi fanfic ever!!!

Omg!;O A blondie being harrassed by a mongrel in a public bathroom!Brilliant!!!:D but it's to get his retina scan... Poor Marcus! But seems as if there is sth more to it for Joshua...perhaps there's hope for them yet ;) Ooh dark Iason with his threat to get the info out of Riki later...good one cause we can't forget that Iason still is a cold bastard, even if he is in love with Riki ;) What is Jupiter up to?:S must be some kind of test or sth..and I'm not sure she would really hurt Iason but maybe her using that as a threat is a way to test Riki's love for him? Kinda ironic, having to resist Iason's masterful torture in order to save Iason ;) This fic is totally awesome!!!:D

Awesome fic this!!!:D I really like it, it's got both Iason/Riki and plausible Katze/Raoul in it, and loads of other original characters as well :D There are a lot of interesting storylines going on here: Katze and Raoul's emerging relationship, that weird plan of Jupiter's, up until now Guy's attempts at getting back Riki and now also Mikhale/Lilly storyline :) And all story-lines and characters come together and interact very nicely, it's interesting I think it definitely adds more to the fic to have an actual story going on in the background :D Also I just LOVE your descriptions of Katze and Raoul and their feelings for each other yet also their insecurities, it's clear to me that Raoul is head over heels with Katze, but is that also the case for Katze?... Maybe it will be in time ;) Riki wasn't exactly jumping either in the beginning of his relationship with Iason (if it could at that point even be called that), but I gotta say Raoul seems less cruel than Iason was in the beginning with Riki ;) I'd read all of this in one go if I had the time, seriously, very good fic so far this, a lot of interesting stuff going on!:D

Hey Hey Hey!
Please pretty please do tell me that you have not forgotten us!
I miss your universe!
In the mean time, I will have to re read it aaalllll over again!
And I'm going to enjoy it more :)

I was looking for some Riki/Iason fic and I stumble with your fic. To be honest, at first I skipped it. I'm not a big fan of new characters.

But, I decided to give it a try.

I spent 2 weeks reading it. And I fell in love with the universe that you created. Of course my favorite parts are the scenes between Iason and Riki but I can't believe how much I also fell in love with everyone else! The twins, V, Rio, Niko, all the blondies. I can't get enough of them. I even started to reread some parts.

Please please pretty please do continue with the story. I'm totally hooked! I'm a junky for your fic! I'm addicted for your talent!

Xoxo

Hi, I found finally the story in the whole. Here in this place the author did stop with the story, but here: http://members.adult-fanfiction.org/profile.php?no=1296882715&view=story&zone=anime you can read chapter 90, 91, 92, 93... till chapter 115

Please take a look, who want to know how the story may lead and sometimes may end^^

First of all, wanted to say that I hope you're doing well. Next, have to tell you that I just read this story all over again from beginning to end and I am still enthralled! If this were an anime, and I sincerely and deeply wish it were, I would be ALL OVER IT! The characters are engaging and so stunningly 3D, the plot is brilliant, and though there are some issues with grammar and spelling and such, it's nothing bad enough to detract from the brilliance that is your story. I've been pretty down and out lately, very sick, had a couple surgeries, and plodding through depression, but reading your story again, it is such a lift to my spirit. I cannot thank you enough for this story and the effort you've put into it and continue to put into it. It brings back my inspiration to continue with my own writing. And I cannot wait for more! Seriously, I'm dying to know what happens, what Riki's going to do now that he's awake, what Iason's going to do when he sees that Riki and the mongrels aren't trying to jet, how V, Sky, and Lilly are going to react to having their pet rings removed, how Jared's going to keep Rio after all the chaos and trouble he's gotten himself into, not to mention the new character, the Ghost, that you introduced ... please, please, PLEASE update soon!

Hi,

first let me say, that my english is not the best, I hope my little review is even so understandable.

I enjoy the whole story very, very much... thank you for your hard work *bow*


One thing... chapter 67 and chapter 68 are the same, right? You may have be by mistake the same chapter uploadet. I hope no chapter is gone lost?

I hope you will write more and more *eagerly*



Thank you again and greetings from Germany *hug*

Oh jeez! I absolutely adore this story; so much so that every few months I reread it. It's that good. I love all your characters and the plot is solid and super compelling. I know you must have other projects but please, pretty please, keep working on this. You have in me, a truly devoted fan.

Damn, I really, really need to read this again. I've been away so long, it's not even funny. Had some mental and physical illnesses going on, still recovering from some of it. Anyway, love the new chapter! Despite not remembering half of what's happening, I found it fantastically engaging anyway. Hope to see an update soon! Keep up the amazing work ^_^