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September 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
you owe us two chapters.
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September 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
come on late-ness, lol. i saw that other person's comment mpreg... maybe you should just write a whole 'nother story for riki
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September 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Riki should be getting sexually frustrated soon. And Lilly too. Riki because Iason was a little insatiable when they were together so going froma bunch of sex to nothing would be, eh, hard. Lilly has that thing, maybe they should have a little make out session before they suddenly break apart a realize what they are doing. More awkwardness, and the team would love it. Drama.
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September 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hey nice going it's really really getting interesting. keep up the good work. i just love niko he is so naughty.And plz dont tell me that riki is going to get pregnant?? is he ??
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August 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
dammmmm that was well worth the wait go niko its your b-day go niko go niko dammmmmmmm go niko that was hot can't wait to see what u got next for us by the way i could totally see that look on iason face in the begining of 33 talk about overkill even raoul feared for his life deadly woaooaa anyway were was i ...................................................
oh yeah niko now with what just happened what do WE think will happen with raoul and katze aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh can'tr wait please update soon
oh yeah niko now with what just happened what do WE think will happen with raoul and katze aaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh can'tr wait please update soon
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August 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
hm, great mpreg. was that a future sneak peak (hoping) or was it a once in a story time opportunity (hoping not so). lol. Poor Riki, can't even defend himself. And Raoul just seems like he really wants Riki to STOP. Fantastic, thanks. And in less than a week!! your great, lol
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August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was yet another good chapter, though I myself am not a fan of m-preg, but if others requested it, that's fine. :) Since I'm so wrapped up in the story I wouldn't quit reading. Though poor Niko... being raped and enjoying it by Gabriel... poor little furniture. Looking forward to the next installment with baited breath as always.
-Sheleeta
-Sheleeta
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August 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awesooooooooooooooome!!!! I really liked this chapter, lol!! Very good very good. Was that a teaser or...*!!!* MAYBE MORE!! lol. Thank you so much, I loved it.
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August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow, Lilly's story was sad. It is a shame that such a thing happened to him, it really is. And just what they don't need, to be hunted by more people. Looking forward to the next installment.
-Sheleeta
-Sheleeta
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August 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I dont really like that guy who is after Nico, he seems to... yelch*. Maybe that girl, Aoi,Ao,Ai? I'm sorry, i forget her name, i think she should give the baby to Riki and run or die. then when he meets Iason again, he has two kids and he's like 'i can not explain' lol. I kind of feel bad for Luke. He's the friend that nobody likes. He's not part of the original group and none of the blondies seem to care about him. mmmmmmmmmmm so sad. Nice chapter though!