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ohhh my god this gets better and better as i go long i love the drama suspense action and the cliffys well no to long cliffys but man this is great u keep me on the edge of my seat wanting to know what happens next now ussually i would say i think u should go in this direction or that direction with a story but this is really good so im gonna try to kept my mouth shut cause i don't want to be bossy or anything but if by any change u'd like to hear some ideas mail me cause this story got me hook and i mean hooked
to the point that i on your page every hour on the hour looking for ur next updated literally

please continue

hmmmmmmmm, quick question. rubies, onyxes, green hairs(emeralds?),blondies, you know the works. Were they all created by Jupiter? So whats it mean, They are the elites that jupiter made when she was tired? And one my question. Since they were all genetically engineered, do they have belly buttons? Cause that's a mommy baby connection, so they shouldn't right?

Hey, I'm a lazy reviewer but a dutiful reader. I just wanted to let you know that this is my favourite story and I love every update. Please continue writing this wonderful story. By the way: I'm always amazed about the plot of the story and the thoughts you must have put into it. It develops more and more with each chapter. Some things that you introduced already chapters ago I just see and understand now. And I really like these 'aha' moments. Did you understand what I wanted to tell you? I'm not sure that I understand it myself. But nevertheless please feel complimented.
I am looking forward to a new round of sexually frustated blondies that try to get their pets (back) ;)
byebye

why so late author?

i agree with 'shishi'. I think an ainokusabi male pregnancy fanfiction by you would be a nice addition to the site. Your past works seem
to have enough potential for it, so i believe you should have a go at it.

Chapter 31 didnt have any Riki in it sigh*. I hope there will be some more of him next time. If your wondering why Im leaving two posts it's because I dont like to mix my reviews with my opinions of what I want in future works. My last comment was based on someone else's but this one is from my own mind. DO you get what I'm trying to say? I'm sorry, i just hate misunderstandings. By the way, you make real nice sex parts. What a weird compliment. Hope we'll get a little RikixIason soon, lol

And the story gets deeper and more interesting. I'm still wondering how they are going to take care of Lily out in space. But I trust you that all will be revealed. I love what Niko did to Gabriel, that was priceless. Can't beat it. Too bad it wasn't on his head. Looking forward to the next installment.
-Sheleeta

so one twin makes weapons and such, the other knows escape paths. Violet can escape from any where. ok, but what about Riki and Guy? what were their special abilities. OMG. new thought. Bison had guy, riki, luke, sid, noriss, aaaand killie. guy luke and riki are gone, if ur keeping up the original killie cant really be in Bison any more so it's just noriss and sid? sad, but the gang was disbanned i guess. good chapter, seems the knowledge is circulating finally, lol.

Poor Riki... that ending almost made me cry. Jupiter is such an evil *****. But we all knew that. I really felt Riki's emotion in that chapter, and of course Jupiter is playing him like a musical instrument. Looking forward to the next installment.
-Sheleeta

oh poor riki. Jupiter you skank! all he wanted was to hear his voice... ITS SO SAD!! Just like a Disney movie. It makes you cry, laugh, get angry, and happy at all the right moments. I love how the story line is your own while keeping you keep the original make up of the actually story. I think this is a perfect example of a fanfiction. You didnt rewrite the story just... gave it a fan's touch. Simply wonderful! You were late but for this chapter... I'm just so happy. You made my day... or night since its like 330am. Omg, i loved this chapter. I have no problems with long chapters, their great. But now how is Riki suppose to find out about himself, Jade Lilly and Katze. My be the old women is still alive!? Riki is such a softy. Now has another kid on board. He should totally adopt her and give Jade a sister. Awwwwwwwwwwwww. how will explain that to Iason. lol. All rambling aside, it was an A+ chapter. cant wait for the next one.
P.S.
you should write a mpreg ai no kusabi. awessssssssssssssssome. lol