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I loved this chapter and after I regained consciousness after finding out that Jade is Riki's "Test Tube Baby" (you can deny it if you want, but you know I pick up things really quickly). And since we know who daddy is then why can't daddy do what his son does. Also how are they both hind the extra chromosome? Now I also know that #3 is.............Lilly................YAY! How many other test tube babies are out there, I am dying to find out. I can wait for the next chapter.

Until then SH47

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oh nooooooooooo. poor Jade. Seems like he can do more than riki and katze though...hmmmmmmmmm, very interesting. Please, i hateto rush people because i know these things take time but... HURRY UP!! LOL. this is really good and i like it, ALOT. cant wait for the next chapter. Awesome!!

It is nice to know that I am not the only one who found Raoul to be a passionate and emotional individual from his portrayal in the books. I completely agree with that and am glad that you are recognizing that. I have always found him warmer, in his own way, than Iason. Anyways, the plot thickens and I'm being dragged into it. Keep up the good work.

Wonderful. Its getting really good. The latest one (chapter15) is making me really wonder. "what's gonna happen next?" Honest tooo God i cant wait for the next chapters! Please keep up the excellent work. I love the details as well. You have tobe a criminal master mind to think up these problems beacuse u seem to really know whatyour talking about. Dont stop now, keep going. Iwant to see wherethis fanfiction is going. The fact that Iason and Riki servive has got me hooked and you writing with a plot, not just smex,is even better. I'm rabbling, anyway,I cant wait forthe next chapter.THANK YOU!!

I can't believe what I just read. How could all of that happen to my Riki, and better yet please don't do it to Katze (he's not as strong as Riki). I think I just maybe as pissed of as Iason and Raoul when he finds out that Katze is one of these test subjects. By any chance is Katze this so called "failure" because Raoul refused to allow them to work on him and nothing was done until the very day that Katze received the information? And could you please put Guy out of his misery, how about have him drown in those tunnels (it would be karma)? *angry face over all of the hurt their inflicting on my "lovelies"* Now I'll move on.

How mean of you not to write about the Katze & Raoul sex after the party scene (totally deflated). I was looking forward to that bit of "Spicy" information (crying at the loss). I think their sex scenes are just as good as Iason & Riki's (Nose gushing blood uncontrollably). At least you did progress the story a lot, I was completely certain that Guy was working alone. Now I see that Luke is helping him and Luke seems to be that one with sense (which is a complete shocker). I don't know what else to say about the story other than
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THAT WAS TOTALLY WICKED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Until next time {*.^}

i have to say i was totally in to your story, really nice and well written fanfiction good work!. plz keep adding more chapters and by the way i really liked raoul and katze love hate relationship more than riki and iason.

All I can say is "WOW". Okay, you got me SH, I did NOT see that coming. I assume that Lilly's Bondie knows he started the fight, but how. I am at a complete loss for words, and that says a LOT. I can say that I am certainly liking the way this story is progressing. Why would anyone want to take pics of Iason & Riki? Jupiter already knows that Iason is ** him into submission (for lack of a better statement). I look forward to your next chapter, bet 'cha can't shock me again (I now know Lilly's power :P). Of course I know the next chapter is going to have Katze screaming \^.^/. I can see Iason doing Riki right there at the party (now wouldn't that be quite the show). And I can see Guy becoming a REALLY BIG issue very soon (speaking of which, please tell me Guy isn't the picture taker +totally deflated+ *soul leaving body*). If so Guy is more of an idiot than I could have thought and he should have died in Dana Burn! Especially after castrating Riki & nearly killing Iason, he's lucky Katze is taking his time finding him.

Til next time {^o^}

I hope you don't mind a more critical review. I gave you 5 stars a couple of times for the initial chapters but right now I don't see where the story is going, if the lesser characters you put in (the 2 other pets) have some meaning then you are dragging it way too long. I like your original reviewed characterization of Iason and Riki because Iason is not too much a prick (after a certain point the tortures and tricks get boring) and Riki is not too stubborn and they seem to find enough of a balance to keep the story going, but the rest is quite unfocused. Including Katze (who is way too whiny for being Katze) and Raoul (who I imagine to be more indulgent and understanding than Iason and surely more rational), their relationship seems a Iason/Riki on a smaller scale. The mystery of the first chapters on why the pets were being examined so closely is losing my interest (I am not a big fan of thrillers/spy stories), however I am coming back every chapter.

I really like this fiction. Please continue soon! Thank You

OMG!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

So apparently what they have is contagious! Why is Iason immune and is Raoul going to get sick? I am dying here! Why leave me wondering *WWWWWWWAAAAAAAAAAAAAA-sobs uncontrollably-gasping for breath*. Katze is hurt *NNNNNNNNNOOOOOOOOOOOOO-cries some more-wipes nose & sniffles*. The doctors over-dosed him *curls up in a ball, in a corner, crying hysterically*. And the doctor who can fix it all is missing *faints*.
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I'm back now. At least Katze found out what was going on (I think) and Iason will save both Katze & Riki (I hope) and Raoul is going to fry those F&C*in' quacks (if their lucky) and Jupiter is going down (wishfully thinking). I loved this chapter and I am going to end my review so I can read it again.

Til next time {^.^}