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Oh... there's going to be blood when Riki gets a hold of the guy with the whip. Loved all the mini scene jumps that still managed to flow and move the story line forwards. As always you're an exceptional author.

Hehe, thanks for the update.

Somehow I pity the poor pets who would never get the taste of freedom in their miserable life. V and Fidget pointing that out didn't help at all. Hehe.

It's like the blondies were also infected by Riki to an extend, coz if it's not then Raoul wouldn't 'feel' that something is wrong there. Dang Jupiter's minions really did something with the vials. Whatever the content is, hope it wouldn't harm the mongrels.

As for Riki's race, the only name I know and remember is when he was called The Ancient One by Amelia's grandmother when he and the gang were trying to escape Femland (can't remember the real name of the planet). Lily is an Alasozi with female attributes (the scent control thingy), Jade got female attributes of Riki's race hence the voice control thingy, while Katze is a half-breed Ura'zen, and Latzen was his dad... If Riki's race got other specific name, then I couldn't find it... *cries*

Well, despite enjoying V's and Fidget's (plus Sky) usual back and forth, I really wish we can get to the exciting adventure soon. Not to complain here - I know you're busy, it's just that I can't get enough of FC's dose. ^^

So Raoul is the one in charge of all the mongrels medications, plausible since drugs administered to the mongrels went past the blondies' supervision, disguised as simple shots. Is Jupiter going to tag them all with the nanites? Whatever it is, I think Riki might know or notice something weird if he's getting another shot, just right before they're going on their field trip.

Iason is such a controlling freak. But I agree with him for making Riki made his promise as it is. There're many people out there looking for Riki, and most of them are not with good reasons. Not to mention that he's one endangered species *still couldn't figure out his race's name, hehe*...

Sakende yaruze to the second episode!! And thank you for the update.

“Don’t fuck this up, boys. I need all of you with me. Once we head back on in, do not get your asses in trouble and piss them off.”

Hehe, though he said it, I think Riki himself is the beacon for most of the troubles coming their way. Speaking of the missing mongrels, does it have anything to do with 'infected' Dr Landon who disappeared without a trace? Was he the person featured in chapter one, whose request to gain custody of Riki from Iason was denied by Jupiter, for the fiftieth time? If he was so obsessed with Riki, he could be doing experiments on the kidnapped mongrels in hope of finding Riki's people among them. Arrghh so many questions unanswered... just ignore my ramblings, my fantasy knows no bounds... hehe ^^

What happened to AFF's review section? This is my third attempt at reviewing since all I got just now was a white blank page...

Hehe, Raoul still got the beef with Gabriel for stealing his furniture? Heh, that prideful blondie. When he's gonna admit that he treated Niko almost like a son instead of servant?

Then there's Orphe and whatever little affection he had for Fidget in his eyes, for a moment there. Is it because Fidget helped him to bed Violet? Sometimes I shudder at the thought of being Fidget's target practice of his witty remarks and pranks. Seriously, I'd start losing my composure and bicker with him all day too, just so I could make my point across.

Thanks for the update ^^.

OK, I must say it: I'm completely hooked on you fanfiction. It has probably been a year since I started following it, and I have loved every moment of it. The character's portrayals are practically perfect, the story arcs incredibly interesting and I have found, to my own surprise, that I even like a lot your OC's. I can't wait to read the next chapters :D . With that said, I just have a "complain": the relationships themselves. It's not that I don't like them because I actually love them very much, but it's just that I can't stand how the Blondies treat the boys. I know that it's perfectly in character, but even Iason is still controlling every movement of Riki, and the others have basically enslaved the rest of them and force them to do what they want. I know this is comes from the original story, but I thought that with your fic you would develop the characters towards more equal and healthy relationships. So, maybe it's not exactly a complain but a question, I just want to know if the Blondies will start treating the boys like people and not like objects (Because, as much as I love manga, the "bastard boyfriend" trope really gets on my nerves: NO MEANS NO YOU BLOND BASTARDS!!><). So, that's pretty much it, I would really like if you would answer my question ^^. I will continue to read your story till the very end of it :D (and I hope those bastard cyborgs, or whatever they are, start treating their partners witk more respect, because right now i just want to jump in the story and start kciking some blondie butt ¬¬*).

(sorry, it got cut) OK, I must say it: I'm completely hooked on you fanfiction. It has probably been a year since I started following it, and I have loved every moment of it. The character's portrayals are practically perfect, the story arcs incredibly interesting and I have found, to my own surprise, that I even like a lot your OC's. I can't wait to read the next chapters :D . With that said, I just have a "complain": the relationships themselves. It's not that I don't like them because I actually love them very much, but it's just that I can't stand how the Blondies treat the boys. I know that it's perfectly in character, but even Iason is still controlling every movement of Riki, and the others have basically enslaved the rest of them and force them to do what they want. I know this is comes from the original story, but I thought that with your fic you would develop the characters towards more equal and healthy relationships. So, maybe it's not exactly a complain but a question, I just want to know if the Blondies will start treating the boys like people and not like objects (Because, as much as I love manga, the "bastard boyfriend" trope really gets on my nerves: NO MEANS NO YOU BLOND BASTARDS!!). So, that's pretty much it, I would really like if you would answer my question ^^. I will continue to read your story till the very end of it :D (and I hope those bastard cyborgs, or whatever they are, start treating their partners witk more respect, because right now i just want to jump in the story and start kciking some blondie butt ¬¬*).

Hell yeah, shout out to the remake! *Note the date on sticky*

Age is not really an issue for the four pets (Riki, Katze, Lily & Jade), but it is for the three other mongrels. Could Riki's influence somehow reach to the point of slowing their ageing process? Wonder if Jupiter already has a plan about this matter... ^^

Heh, another sexually frustrated blondie to the list. ^^ Go Aisha!

Thanks for the update!!! Love the direction you are taking, waiting anxiously for more!

“God’s call’n ya, Orphe. Maybe he heard my prayers and has come to set me free.”

Haha I really love how you manage to conjure such a situation where catchy retort will get back to the other speaker, especially the banter between V and Fidget. Like Fidget said, "You suck, V" and V replied, "With skill, *followed by something like his fan mail and calls for his talented tongue and mouth, lols*" Heck once someone I know said that I suck, and I unthinkingly answered "With skill". We were both surprised, then we just laughed it off and she said "Damn, that was really cool." See how much FC influenced me subconsciously? ^^ *Too bad she's not into yaoi...*

Back to the topic, did Orphe just make Iason wait for him? Haha, I bet Iason's gonna get irritated even though he might have guessed what they had been doing when he's calling. ^^