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December 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've reviewed in your lj, but I review again here since I feel like you deserve more ^^. I think a lot of people read your story, but maybe all they can think is how awesome the fic is. Therefore, they read everything and forgot to leave a review for the author because their head was still reeling from epic yaoi bliss plus exciting adventures crafted in your AnK ficworld. It happened to me previously.
Ranting aside, I like how Riki showing his protective instinct toward Jade, or at least trying to act fatherly. A little interesting since we know that the concept of parents are very strange in Amoi... Well good luck Jade trying to get Gideon's attention that way. ^^
And Iason got another long hours of field day with Riki. That damn blondie. Have some mercy on Riki!
Ranting aside, I like how Riki showing his protective instinct toward Jade, or at least trying to act fatherly. A little interesting since we know that the concept of parents are very strange in Amoi... Well good luck Jade trying to get Gideon's attention that way. ^^
And Iason got another long hours of field day with Riki. That damn blondie. Have some mercy on Riki!
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December 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh sweet, you really update! I was so excited to read this chappy that somehow I got stuck reading the first two paragraphs for a minute...
And I sooo loved Riki's and Iason's moment together, that was freaking hawt! Too bad it was a kinda short chapter, coz it often leave me hanging wanting to read more. Haha I wonder if Lily and Jade knew about Riki and his Blondie's activity in the other room. Riki's screams were telling enough lol. By the way, did he betray Rio's name to Iason?^^ Bet Iason would present his ass to Jared later, after he's done interrogating that guy for information.
So there are at least two different people who want Riki. One to kill him, one to kidnap him... Kirin aside, hope you'll reveal the other identities soon enough.
And I sooo loved Riki's and Iason's moment together, that was freaking hawt! Too bad it was a kinda short chapter, coz it often leave me hanging wanting to read more. Haha I wonder if Lily and Jade knew about Riki and his Blondie's activity in the other room. Riki's screams were telling enough lol. By the way, did he betray Rio's name to Iason?^^ Bet Iason would present his ass to Jared later, after he's done interrogating that guy for information.
So there are at least two different people who want Riki. One to kill him, one to kidnap him... Kirin aside, hope you'll reveal the other identities soon enough.
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November 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OMFG!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Your story is AMAZING!!!!! I've read it like 5 times over and I'm still in love with it, PLEASE update soon, I can't wait to see what you think up next. Oh and by the way, LOVE the writing style.
~Ta
~Ta
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October 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! Thank you very much! ^^
So it was the living mask after all. It seemed that I let my imagination run too wild in my previous review. Lols. Do I smell some Jared x Rio in the future? Don't ever grab an attention of a blondie, Rio, lest you get more than you can chew. Though I really don't mind you getting screwed for that, hahaha. *enters some perverted thoughts*
And now he could change his hair color willingly too, after being in contact with Riki. Interesting, indeed. I wondered whether Iason had listened to their phone conversation the entire time. Damn, promise me that you'd write the hottest, angstiest, baddast and sexiest Iason's field day with Riki in the next chapter, alright? ^^
So it was the living mask after all. It seemed that I let my imagination run too wild in my previous review. Lols. Do I smell some Jared x Rio in the future? Don't ever grab an attention of a blondie, Rio, lest you get more than you can chew. Though I really don't mind you getting screwed for that, hahaha. *enters some perverted thoughts*
And now he could change his hair color willingly too, after being in contact with Riki. Interesting, indeed. I wondered whether Iason had listened to their phone conversation the entire time. Damn, promise me that you'd write the hottest, angstiest, baddast and sexiest Iason's field day with Riki in the next chapter, alright? ^^
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October 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Just re-read this from the beginning, I have to say the first few chapters are still my favorite of all time! I'm not always a fan of OC stories, but you do it very very well! But that first chapter, especially how it ties back to the ending of the series, well it is just fantastic! Whenever, I rewatch AnK I will now forevermore pretend this is how it truly ended!
Glad to see such an active writer in this category, I hope you return to this story soon! Thanks so much for all the work and effort you have put into this so far!!
Glad to see such an active writer in this category, I hope you return to this story soon! Thanks so much for all the work and effort you have put into this so far!!
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September 18, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for updating. ^^
How old is Rio anyway? I like Rio, I mean he's cool in sort of crazy, reckless way. And *cutely* annoying. Though I wonder what is his purpose of being there. Is he the other assassin hired to kidnap Riki and kill Iason or does he have his own agenda? He's unique, making me think at one point whether he could be one of the ancient races from another planet. He looked like he'd been genetically enhanced too. Not to mention his interest in Riki... and the revelation that he could be Jade's ex-master.
And talking about Riki - that sexy little beast, Iason's soo gonna have a field day 'interrogating' him at home. ^^ Lols.
Jerico... I don't know whether to hate him or pity him. He's already 'infected' in a way, his obsession of Jade would be his doom. And whatever he's been planning will surely backfire on him later, with Riki against him. Since whatever involves Riki involves Iason, and Jade's Gideon, I'd consider his Elite ass got fried in the future. On another thought, is it safe with Jerico knowing that Jade is Riki's son?
Damn, you have so many mysterious things plotted and leave me hanging wanting to know more. And the fact that I'd have to wait for a while before the next update is poor torture. You meanie. ^^
Well, will Jade get his lovely little bottom screwed by Gideon as the punishment for disobeying his blondie? ^^
How old is Rio anyway? I like Rio, I mean he's cool in sort of crazy, reckless way. And *cutely* annoying. Though I wonder what is his purpose of being there. Is he the other assassin hired to kidnap Riki and kill Iason or does he have his own agenda? He's unique, making me think at one point whether he could be one of the ancient races from another planet. He looked like he'd been genetically enhanced too. Not to mention his interest in Riki... and the revelation that he could be Jade's ex-master.
And talking about Riki - that sexy little beast, Iason's soo gonna have a field day 'interrogating' him at home. ^^ Lols.
Jerico... I don't know whether to hate him or pity him. He's already 'infected' in a way, his obsession of Jade would be his doom. And whatever he's been planning will surely backfire on him later, with Riki against him. Since whatever involves Riki involves Iason, and Jade's Gideon, I'd consider his Elite ass got fried in the future. On another thought, is it safe with Jerico knowing that Jade is Riki's son?
Damn, you have so many mysterious things plotted and leave me hanging wanting to know more. And the fact that I'd have to wait for a while before the next update is poor torture. You meanie. ^^
Well, will Jade get his lovely little bottom screwed by Gideon as the punishment for disobeying his blondie? ^^
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September 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Finally got caught back up with this story!! Glad to hear of your personal success with writing! While I always look forward to new chapter, I can't help but be happy for you.
I have to say you have renewed my love with AnK, and your OC are entertaining as well. Now if only you would write a little pet scene between Lilly and Riki...drools over thought...
I have to say you have renewed my love with AnK, and your OC are entertaining as well. Now if only you would write a little pet scene between Lilly and Riki...drools over thought...
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September 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i loveeeee....your updated.....
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September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Cuuuuuute!! I love the part between Jade and Gideon and how Jade's getting frustrated rather than fearful when Gideon touches him. Let's see if he really does go ask "daddy" how to seduce his blondie, lol. Can't wait! I was so excited there was a new chapter out today. You're updates always lift my spirits and make me laugh and think about what might happen next. Speaking of which ... what is that assassin planning to do? Who is the other assassin Kirin hired?? Sounds like Iason's going to have some more trouble coming his way. Better be prepared! Who's the dude with the changing eyes? Is he the same guy on that planet where Riki and gang fled to where they were always competing? Can't remember what the planet was called, have to go back and look, but anyway. What does he want? Is he after Riki, too?? "Unhealthy" if Iason becomes aware of "Mr. Riadson's" interest in his pet. Haha, I think that's an understatement. Aaaah, I'm so bummed that you'll be disappearing again! I was so hoping to get another update really soon. But I ... suppose ... I'll have to forgive you. *Sigh* Just kidding, lol, congratulations on getting your book accepted for publishing!! I'm trying to get one of mine published, too, actually, so I kinda know how that is. Good luck, and I hope to see another chapter out soon, regardless! *Squeal!* I adore Jade and Gideon, just so you know! I also adore the twins and their blondies and V and his blondie and Lily and his blondie, and let's not forget Riki and Iason! I just love all your characters and all of your book. (Didn't mean for that to sound so um ... what's the word I'm looking for? Sappy? Insanely envious? Ah! Like a crazy fan girl. That's what it is.) Haha, see ya!
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September 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh, totally forgot, thanks for telling me about your LJ page and the side stories you have there. I'll definitely go look them up! (: